 E. Christianna 2008-01-26 . chapter 1Loved the story! Olivia is the greatest isn't she?! Keep up the great writing :) |
 Gavi 2008-01-06 . chapter 1This is beging for another chap!
Thanks |
 VillageVoice 2008-01-06 . chapter 1awe...thats so cute. I love these two
Great story |
 Sparkling Dolphin 2008-01-06 . chapter 1Nice story. Loved how descriptive it was. It made it easy to picture. 4/5 stars! :) |
 No Wishing on the Never Star 2008-01-06 . chapter 1Good job. |
 duc7ti 2008-01-06 . chapter 1A great story. Love the idea of Olivia calling even though she thought it wasn't the best idea. |