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dancing elf 5/30/11 . chapter 3
entertaining
Fangirl69 6/4/09 . chapter 3
Hahaha, This story is AWESUM! Im really enjoying it, please get the next chapter up soon ]
Arion Girl 10/8/08 . chapter 3
bwah! I still can't believe it's still here! I love these three chapters so far and I'm anxious for some more!

I do hope you don't discontinue this story because I really enjoy it. I hope you update soon!

Ja Ne!
XxXChibiBunniXxX 7/13/08 . chapter 3
great story update soon!
Lost In A Dark Wood 4/28/08 . chapter 3
I like this story, it's nice and subtle. It has excellent quirky humor, but it blends in with what you'd expect a struggling bartender and successful CEO suffering from ennui (or is it depression?) to do.

I can't wait to see where you take this. In that light, please update soon! :D
koolmint26 2/2/08 . chapter 3
omg kaiba is so mean...grr
TenkunoMeiou 2/2/08 . chapter 1
All praise the mighty SetoJou!

_ I like this so far! You write very well and keep the chars. believeable! :D Good job! Keep going!
Kiki 2/2/08 . chapter 3
I like your story very much! The characters are great! Please update soon!
dragonlady222 2/1/08 . chapter 3
Sounds like Kaiba was missing something in his life. Maybe his little fights with Jou? I like the chapter.
mandapandabug 2/1/08 . chapter 3
aw that was so cute! and the accent thing is so true! my sister's ex was from west virginia so he sounded really ... dumb as we would put it, but he was a ... like computer engineer and a really good one! he got a high paying job with the government right out of college! anyway! that was adorable! Kaiba was releaved! aw. and poor Jou! to be the butt of all Kaiba's frustration! to be used like that! i thought Jou did a really good job of holding his tounge and Kaiba was really losing it! they like traded places! then Jou burst. but that isn't the point! they need to have something more dangerous then picking up cigrette butts happen! i love danger! _ and this fic! review you later_
o-banana 2/1/08 . chapter 3
Wow, I loved this chapter. -hearts-

Just the dialogue, the flow, the execution, the characterization, everything was perfect. Awesome chpater, great work, keep em' coming!

-Bleep
Journey Maker 2/1/08 . chapter 3
There's something really bothering Seto and for some reason I really think that he wants to talk to Jou about it but he's to proud to let anyone know... I love this story. Please update when you can...
koolmint26 1/23/08 . chapter 2
oh how fun!

drinking lol

stupid kaiba we will se where this goes
Angel-Belle 1/21/08 . chapter 2
Hmm...an interesting start...
casaragi 1/19/08 . chapter 2
this story has catsh my attention now i will put it in my alert list
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