This is a great fic, it truly is. I appreciated the realism of it and Jyou's train of thought and his mentality toward all that happened. I was really rooting for the two of them to get together at the end (honestly, I doubted it would happen right before it all finished!). I love your style of writing. Paper Moon is a great piece of work, I added it to my favourites!

I'll read your other Digimon fics, defitnely! =)

I suppose you're long gone, Musouka, but I think I'll drop off one final compliment.

I really like your vision of Jyou. It gives nerdy klutzs (like one who shall remain nameless) hope. I really like your version of Yamajyou, as well. I think it's one of the most delicate, carefully thought-through versions I've ever seen. And great insights into what love really is. Friendship and love are but different depths of the same great human condition...thanks for clarifying that.

-Daniel

*sneaks into the last bit*

Free talk! Yaye!

I'd say more right now but I am distracted. o.O

I think I might really add you to my LJ friend-list (provided your account is still open :P) because you seem to be awesome.

I INTEND TO FILL YOUR INBOX WITH BELATED REVIEWS! WHE! XD

That's all. ^__^

*shrieks* I am a bit late coming in on this, but I love you. You write such amazing Yamato/Jyou... yaye! XD

Again, it's been ages since I was last interested in Digimon... however, it was a lovely romp through memory lane! And such a wonderful love adventure, too!

At any rate, I am off to read even more of your fics (whilst arguing with my father via MSN... damn him, ruining a good story by interrupting me and yapping at me like an idiot XD) and review even more!

I do hope these get to your inbox and you can be inspired to continue some of your other fics. :) Take care, Musouka-chan!

Jyou! Damn you, Yamato! Just admit your feelings! XD

Hee. *moves onto the next chapter*

^_^

...angst.

Poor Jyou. ;_;

WAI! Poor Koushirou! *sobs*

*grins* I can't help myself from grinning, though... yaye, Yamato/Jyou!

*coughs* Onwards, to the next chapter!

(I swear, you're gonna have loads of reviews when you wake up in the morning... XD)

Yay! Yamato kissed Jyou!

*shifty eyes* I can't help but root for Jyou... XD

Sweet! I shall review further! :D

More squeeing ensues...

I already read this, but this time I am re-reading and reviewing every chapter. :P Hah!

Awesome. :)

Wait, so there is going to be a sequal type story? From Yamato's point of view? Lets hope there is. I really enjoyed this story, I love the character of Jyou, and Yamato is perfect for him, in my opinion. I like your Jyou very much. Where he has a wit about him, but that it only comes out when he's bashing himself. Please continue with this story line, it is very, very intrigueing.

i cannot believe people wanted yamato to stay with taichi!! come on!! Jyou is so much better!! i'll take Jyou anytime...*pouts* oh well, they still got together, so thats good!! ^_^ i do Michiko got back with Shin...Some people freeze at times...love this story! ^_^

This really is a masterpiece, I think! I usually don't read a lot of Digimon fics, but I decided to today and this was the first one I chose. I'd definitly say that it's worthy enough to go in meh favorites ;)

i know that i have already reviewed this story...so this is just a question. i went to your site and nothing i tried to click on worked. is this just my computer rebelling against me or is the site not working all that well yet? Your site is very pretty though *pauses* pretty. not a good word. your site is very well done with nice pictures that i could see. Much more discriptive than pretty....

Konnichiwa Musouka-san. Well, to put it mildly i really enjoyed your story. i'm not that big of a romance fan so i don't get to read all that many great digimon fanfics. when i went to find the other stories that you mentioned they evaided me. Of course i'm a little slow on the uptake but that is not really the point. Are the posted yet? I did really enjoy the story. I also like your version of the little mermaid (can't remember the name). i was going to leave a review but i don't like to until the story actually ends...i very much enjoy your writing and if you do publish anything be sure to let me know.

Kaji

I really loved this fic! I've now read it *counts on fingers* 1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1...Ack! I've run out of hands! Well, a LOT of times =^_^=. I agree with you about the kiss part, its somehow more...special...in my opinion. I really can't wait for 'Drifting on a Cardboard Sea', 'Canvas Sky' and 'Love letters' they sound like there gonna be great too!