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| jessnickfan1 2008-01-10 ch 1, | abuseLOVE IT PLEASE CONTINUE |
| Adidas3 2008-01-06 ch 1, | abuseJust a bit of constructive criticism, script format is not allowed on the site and it's very hard to read too. Don't think I'm dissing on your story because I'm far from it. I'm only passing down some advice to help you out. Plus a reasonable title or even saying untitled until you come up with an appropriate title would be beneficial then saying a palex fanfiction. |