Reviews for The Hidden Hero

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Ezmerelda 2008-07-24 ch 36,	abuseWonderful story! Every twist and turn, it was an engrossing read - so much so that I spent my entire day off, sitting in front of the computer, reading it, instead of outside swimming and enjoying this warm summer day. And the ending - just perfect! Thanks for writing. ~"~
CT 2008-07-24 ch 36, anon.	abuseI won't go into a very long review, but I will take the time to commend your writing. You are very skilled. However, I would like to say this, -- and keep in mind this is nothing but a personal opinion -- that while I greatly enjoyed your story from the start until Harry defeated Voldemort, everything that followed felt to me somewhat of a letdown. I loved reading about Mark Twist, and the stories involving him were dramatic, well reasoned, and interested. After defeating Voldemort, Harry is manipulated almost past tolerance even for me as a reader, as he never once DOES anything about it, despite his great power as a wizard. Whereas Mark Twist was an engaging protagonist, Harry Potter was the opposite. Again, that's just my opinion, but where I read about Mark Twist with an eagerness to not miss a word of the story, I only wanted to get through the other parts. Thank you for writing, your story is excellent for the most part (and I daresay many would disagree with what else I have said, as others may truly enjoy how you chose to end the story). In any event, I hope to read more by you at some point. Cheers, CT
Tsubasa no Michi 2008-07-20 ch 27,	abuseI liked this story up until now. It seems that all of a sudden you've turned him into some **, who's will has just evaporated. How different from the previous chapters, and as I read on, I notice that this is how the whole story goes on and even ends... he doesn't even take revenge or anything... It's pathetic. You ruined what was once a good fic with this slave-nonsense.
LordSalvador 2008-07-15 ch 23,	abusei must sy: WOW! amazing story! this chapter was just brilliant. expecially the part about tolerance and this stuff!! that was REALLY REALLY great!!
KDuckeyD 2008-07-15 ch 2, anon.	abuseWonderful beginning, creative approach that is full of true feeling. Keep up the good work.
CrayonsPink 2008-07-15 ch 36,	abuseI loved this story! It was beautifully written. A sequeal would be a great idea, but if you don't want to you don't have to. Excellent job!
TheX00 2008-07-13 ch 29,	abuseThis was an _extremely_ good chapter. Thanks for writing it!
Bar00n 2008-07-12 ch 36,	abuseGot damn, this story was great. I've nearly given up reading fanfiction and only follow a couple of storys now. After reading the last book for the tenth time I wanted to read a good fanfiction that would explain what happend to harry after HP&DH, looking for a good fiction I came over this. After reading a little I simply loved it. A great story, just the way I like it. The story moves fast without leaving out to much, the story presents a great Harry that I realy love. Every character is presented in the way I would have written them. Even Draco and Snape. Only thing that dissapointed me was the way you excluded sirius, all though that would have made the whole snape think impossible and I liked that a lot. Hard to say realy:) Great story:) I would to find a sort of sequell, you have the best possible place to start a extremly good fic now, use it:) And if you use it, make sure to let me know, I will follow it every step of the way:)
fydyan 2008-07-09 ch 25,	abuseWow, this is disgusting. I'm actually surprised by how repulsed I am by the last two chapters. From reading reviews of the next few chapters, I get the sense that it only gets worse. I won't be reading this any further, and I can't say I regret that.
Slick101 2008-07-08 ch 36,	abusegood story but what the hell i get this ** but i figured he would have been fighting people more because of his anger or something so update soon and keep writing.
Slick101 2008-07-08 ch 34,	abusegood story so far and i'll read the rest later.
Jackie 2008-07-05 ch 27, anon.	abuseI liked this story. Loved it even. Until I came to this chapter. It did a complete 180 from where I thought it was going. Hell I was starting to not like it when you didn't even have Harry try to get out of the back exit that all resturants have last chapter. He's just going along with it, he didn't even try to fight.He was strong and independent earlier in the story and now it's like his will has been shattered completely. I can't even bring myself to finish this story because It's taken such a big turn
starboy454 2008-07-04 ch 36,	abuseilike
PrettyFanGirl 2008-07-03 ch 36,	abuseI love the idea of a sequel! I loved this story so much! There were times when I was really scared for multiple reasons, but I still loved it!
Thornclaw 2008-07-02 ch 36, anon.	abuseWell, I must admit that I was rather shocked when you had Voldie die in Harry's 5th year... I was rather flabberghasted at the fact that there was more AFTER he was dead-and I quite liked it. Most of the fanfictions that I've read pretty much end when Voldemort's finished off, and I liked the way that you made the story continue after the old tosser died-very original and a stimulating read-thank you for the story!

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