|Reviews for Unfinished Business|
| Nvrmore 1/8/08 . chapter 1
Aww. Very sweet. And nice to see them have a heart-to-heart. And he said 'I love you' again.
And... Is this their second time in a ditch, or just a different pov? :D
| SamDeanLover28 1/7/08 . chapter 1
beautiful...that was beautiful
| TraSan 1/7/08 . chapter 1
An excellent little fix-it one-shot. Of course Dean would be worried about someone breaking his heart like Cassie. Oof.
Great little bridge!
And again - as far as details? When Dean cries and only the single tear or his eyes are welling it IS his right eye. When I read that, I thought back to ELAC (the pyre), Heart, etc and it was true. Awesome!
| Nana56 1/6/08 . chapter 1
Oh, what a beautiful one-shot! I absolutely loved it. Dean intertwining their fingers as they go for the walk, being vulnerable, and then looking for a place to lay his jacket and his girl down. Oh, so well done! Ever so much more romantic than graphic description.
What a good guy Sam is, too!
It's late and I'm out of superlatives.
| Tacpebs 1/6/08 . chapter 1
Aw it was cute! Ew! Lol. J/king! I thought it was nice. XD
| CatBeist 1/6/08 . chapter 1
Aw, they are a little too cute... And a little moshy but it's okay, cus it is JUST Dean and Laura... no one is around but Sam who is sneak peaking to check that everything is going all right...
“Love isn’t just about the smiles and the laughter... it’s about sharing the load, it’s about leaning on each other when no one else will have us...
I think Laura need to be reminded of the time when they sat down and had this little chat... and it can fit the story, the Chicago thing... everything is connected and both Dean and Laura got to understand that together is when they are the strongest... Not when they are each fighting the battle alone
Great story, or oneshot... glad you posted it :D
| violetstars1039 1/6/08 . chapter 1
Aw poor Dean, he's so paranoid haha. Very well written, I enjoyed that alot.
| rozzy07 1/6/08 . chapter 1
It not often, well truly never, ever, do I advocate the branding of tattoos but seriously 'D & L 4Ever' should be inked on our two love birds behinds! True love, Sifi, sucker punching me here into a silly grin of happiness despite the dark history. Great one off. And Sam, bless his cotton socks, is happy to tag along behind their love soaked ride because - well just because!