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| Jewelled Tears 2008-06-24 ch 12, anon. | abuseThis story is a great replacement while waiting for the next book to come... |
| Linxcat 2008-06-06 ch 12,  | abuseThat was fantastic! There isn't much CoAD fanfiction on here, so it's always great to read some. Looking forward to that sequel :D |
| neverevereverblueohnevernev... 2008-04-07 ch 12, anon. | abuseSEQUEL! SEQUEL! YAY! YAY! PLZ PLZ RITE A SEQUEL! xrowanx (i fink i spelt sequel rong soz) :) |
| shadowwolf44 2008-04-06 ch 12, | abusewow...this story is awesome |
| ell 2008-04-06 ch 12, anon. | abuseits a very nice story but... i really wanted it to be a renn torak love story, the last chapter was a perfect scean for them to kiss anyway rite another story this time a romance ^^ |
| SunnyIvy 2008-04-05 ch 9, | abuseThis is really really brilinat!! If it wasn`t fan fiction you could definatly get published. THe story is full of exiting twists and has a good plot, but there is perhaps a little too much happening all the time, take some pauses to describe scenes, build characters etc. But on the whole this is a fantastic story written with skill... I`d love it if you wrote some stories:-) |
| renn and torak 4eva 2008-04-04 ch 12, | abuseHI I REALY LOVED YOUR STORY IT WAS SO GOOD YOU HAVE TO RIGHT ANOTHER 1! YOU ARE SUCH A GOOD WRIGHTER! RENN AND TORAK 4EVA |
| renn and torak 4eva 2008-03-15 ch 1, | abusebest story eva plz make it a love story keep writting renn and torak 4eva |
| RennxTorak Forever 2008-03-07 ch 9, | abuse... i can picture the Otherworld, and it scares me... I LOVE THIS! UPDATE PLEASE! NOW...! |
| ell 2008-03-04 ch 9, anon. | abusei love this book but... PLEASE MAKE THIS A TORAK/ RENN ROMANCE STORY, THERE WAS A GREAT SCEAN BACK THERE WHEN RENN WAS COMFORTING TORAK, THAT WOULD HAVE BEEN A GREAT SCEAN FOR 'LOVE' lol anyway, keep this up it's great! from ell |
| GunslingerExtraordinaire 2008-02-28 ch 8, | abuseahh update soon! i love it - theres way not enough coad fics here, so keep it up! XD x |
| Tiff 2008-02-16 ch 8, anon. | abusecool, ur gud at tis Chronicals of ancient darkness rules! tip never rite bout HP else ul be as weird as everyone else who does! anyway keep riting (HP sucks) soz i just cant stand hp addicts. |
| RennxTorak Forever 2008-02-15 ch 8, | abuseoh my god... you gotta keep going! its getting so good! update soon!:) PS- im the same peson as RennandTorak4ever, i recently got an acount. |
| myrmidryad 2008-02-15 ch 8, | abuseoh! the tension mounts! O_O |
| ell 2008-02-10 ch 7, anon. | abusethis is really good!! OMG WHATS GONNA HAPPEN TO BALE! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE... MAKE THIS A TORAK/RENN LOVE STORY! if u do this story will be best ive ever read! from and really big fan ELL !! :) TORAK AND RENN FOR EVER |