dude you asked if there were parings we readers want to see well... i have some like krad/daisuke L/kira L/light krad/saitoshi dark/krad inuyasha/miroku inuyasha/koga lelouch/suzaku naruto/sai yea i'm really bored i like how you did this story so if you could make some more maybe with the pairings above i'd love it!

P.S sorry is i misspelled anything.

Have A Great Day!

so sad i almost cried! you totally do a yaoi! plz?

I personally avoid reading fics like this, because I love paragraphs (I know, that sounds kind of weird-but it's hard to get me read stories w/o paragraphs) and because the fics that I've read in the past of this style have almost always disappointed me; most of the time, they focus more on the overly dramatic one-liners than the simple but powerful lines that come with good wriing. I have to say, however, that your story is an exception, and I quite liked this one. Personally, I enjoyed 18, 24, and 25 the most. Keep writing! -_

I've never really read LxMello before, but it's cute here! I love 21 and 25 especially.

Ah this made my heart ache.

Srsly there needs to be more Mello/L, because it's just so effing hot and complicated and wrong. Sigh.

I'm not sure why the first thing I could think to tell you was "GOOD GIRL!"

I love you so much. You are my LxMello partner in crime WHETHERYOULIKEITORNOT. We are soul sisters.

And you write it WELL. If only you could see the way I clapped my hands.

The only thing I found disappointing is that there wasn't more. I don't want to be one of those people who yell "WRITE MOAR" but uh. Plz 2 b writing moar LxMello shotaz, ok?

I really love this writing style. It's original and just amazing.

Yay, LxMello. They are too cute for their own good. :)

I'm pretty sure I like word number 25 the best.

It sent chills down my spine.

Wonderful job, Toshi-kun.

Oh, yes, LxMello needs to take over because it is the crack pairing with a basic basis if you read into Mello's reaction to L's death! (Which I obviously did, and you too.) Plus Another Note coming up. Anyway. I liked this. It was sexy even though it shouldn't be. My absolute FAVORITE was number 21, "Dependence," for some reason. I don't quite know why, but I loved that one a lot. I liked "Ghost" second best. Nice job.

I liked it! I really have a thing for LxMello and I love to read/write drabbles. But, yeah... let's see. I think my favorite snippet would probably be... Alone and then Positions. XD It's funny to imagine Mello being Seme to L. Anyway, good job!

Goodbye and goodluck!