This is so beautiful, the end made me cry! Great job!

Ohmigosh, i almost cried at the end. I absolutely, positively, HATE stories about death. They're horrible, and I cry. Or near-death experiences. Like, I'm-about-to-pull-the-plug-but-then-suddenly-the-person-awakes-from-her/her-coma-and-everyone-celebrates.

Yeah... I read a Twilight story like that... sobbed my poor heart out.

I'm truly crying, that was just so beautiful! I listened to the song as I read it, too, so that helped so much! -sniff-
ah, that was beautiful, thank you! =)

Ahh that was so increadibly cute! i love it!

Not a bad story... but the spelling mistakes could have been avoided.

Aw...that was beautiful!

I LOVED THE FIC!
But DAMN YOU FOR USING THAT SONG!
It alwats makes me cry.

wow. if only life was as sweet and easy as this. =3

what the heck?!?

OMG!really awsome!i love it! you are still doing a sequal for the Talk tho right? you Have to! ill die it you dont! you could do it a a b-dat present to me! Friday is my b-day!
brebreisme

Wow. Awesome oneshot! No, amazing! Great job!

I saw what song you used and I was like "oh, man, no way, that's gonna make me cry". then my hand clicked on it. i was like "no no no don't click on it stupid hand! i don't want to cry tonight! seriously! stop!" but it didn't. then my eyes started to read it and i was like "no i'm not gonna read it i refuse it's gonna make me cry again!" but i read it anyway. dang eyes. can't stay away. and guess what? it DID make me cry. i'm not an easy one to make cry but that song does it and this fic to that song really did it. *sob* so sad, so sweet, so awesome. it really deserved me signing in to review but i'm too lazy and still searching for a tissue... :)

but my self-defense critic is kicking in on the basis that if i can find something to critisize i'll stop crying. ;) i would have put, there at the very end, just before the last line of the song, one last scene when they were fifteen, with Fang turning around instead of going to sleep and on an impulse grabbing max before she could get angry with him and kissing her, then the last line. but that's just me. and sadly no it didn't stop the tears. *sobbing still*

where the heck did that box of tissues go...?

great story! luv the song, and luv the way you incorporated it into max and fang's lives.

=> ani

Oh my gosh! This is such a great story! The ending had me in tears, and that itself is an achievment :P Aww!! **starts tearing up at thought of last paragraph**
You HAVE to write more like these!! Maybe for the other flock members? You are a great writer!!

x\-Kazie-/x

oh my gosh this is so beautifully written i almost cried at the end!i love this song by the way.