So very, very sad. I guess when you say tragic, you aren't kidding. Why arent more of these stories in eternal desitny?

ahh... no... kagome...


i cried! Poor Inuyasha! I hate naraku!

Wow... yes, it is a tragedy... sad... why on earth had it gone that Naraku had to plan such a horrid thing... though your writing skills are great, really, great language skills... good going!

that was so sad

:( that was sad. i really hope Takahashi will not be that cruel. what number manga was this inspired from. i'm having trouble finding the newest ones.

ok, im a bit slow at things..what part of the manga did you get this idea from?

~Miko

NO! Kagome! *sobsobsob*





its good, even though its sad...

is there anything you can't do. I mean dang your amazing, you made that SO OOC it's not even funny. Good god chick you made me cry in that thing it was so awesome. You said you wanted to write a tradic story and you did, I wish I could write like that. But no grammer errors or anything.

Just to tell you again i love this oneshot

wow...that was really good

holy crap!! im crying right now!! seriously, there are tears in my eyes! that was so tragic, so sad, so romantic! i loved it! you are truley an amazing writer. you need to write a book and publish it, i would seriously buy it. anyways this was amazing and i look forward to reading your other stories XD

How terribly sad but it is a reality that if they were real live people this would be a possibility. Good job. I'll talk to you later. ARigat o and ja ne!

Ouch. That isn't a fun way for things to turn out. Of course, life doesn't always turn out well. I somewhat rather doubt Naraku would have planned that exact result, but one never knows with him.

awesome as usual>.< loved it, its always good thing to read a nice tragedy once in a while.

Aww, I liked it but it was sad. Good job.

That was so very sad, but always well written!