this is disgusting and it has no redeeming qualities. it's nothing more than **. i can't believe it was nominated for the sylar/claire awards.

I think you should do a follow up and have Claire kick their asses, because this made me mad. Good job.

Poor Claire. I really like the way Adam speaks but I don't knoe why he felt the need to teach Sylar that. The story flows quite smoothly so I don't mind all the dividers at all. This deserve way more reviews and praise. Heck the fourth part made me want to review. Great choice of words. I love this story! I like that it just about what it is about, that Clarie death isn't pressed here. She took it better than any woman I've read, almost unnatural.

...yep, brain still broken >.<

(on the other hand, the comparison of Adam to an Olympic judge made me lol before my vision was once again violated)

Sylar and Adam are AWESOME when they team up. Usually it seems like it would inevitably lead to huge power struggles, what with Adam's god complex and Sylar's unwillingness to follow anyone, lest people think he's weak/insignificant, but you somehow managed to write them IC and still willing to work together.

I absolutely love the fact that, for a fic that's basically all about the sex, it's surprisingly unsexy. I know you can write gorgeous smut, so the fact that you decided not to do that here really hammers home the horror of the piece, making the rape seem like more of a violation than if you had written it to be arousing to readers.

Despite how much I likes this fic, though, I'm not sure you should have posted it on this site. It's really edging too close to NC-17 to be perfectly legal here. I'm not going to report you, of course, because I would die of lack of Sylarire if they froze your account, even for a couple weeks, but this is truly a little too hardcore to belong on

Wow. Just... wow.

I think I love you...