I enjoyed reading this ^_^

Good one. Congratulations.

Wow. Just...wow. An original idea that turned into a great story. Full marks.

But, as always, I'm going to fall back on my bad nitpicking habits.

"a week before his one of his best friends disappeared" - leave out the first "his".

Other than that, though - and I'm sure it's just a typo - you had no mistakes, which really complements this well written story.

I hope to see more of this in the future.

I really really liked it...

nice way to end and I would probably call Hakora an OC as I don't remember the name form anywhere... even so it's a damn good character and I'd be proud as crap to call that an OC

As to not give away one of the names at the end...

I was actually hoping someone would write something for him this morning I was thinking about taking a stab at it myself but it would have went a completely different way and wouldn't have been near as good

Making Aang's old friend Kuzon the original Blue Spirit..nice.