update soon.

I really love your story. You should continue it when you have the chance too.

please. continue too.

I love your stories. I hope you're able to update them soon. I can't wait. Keep up the good work!

you did a very well job with this story. very well written. I hope you can post the epiloge up sometime soon.

Hey! I greatly enjoyed this fic!I cannot wait to read the epilogue!thanks for the cleo/orphan pairing!

Really good story, continue!

The idea of a child with Cleao's temper and Orphen's.. Orphen-ness.. Is just plain scary.. Is it too late to run for the hills?

I'm so glad you updated! Love the interaction between the two of them, great job!

Fantastic! Amazing! Grandeous!... AWESOME! ^_^
I absolutely LOVE this chapter!!
The conversations, the stories [T_T], the distractions... XD!
Everything!
I particularly liked the mental image of Hartia and Magic escaping from the mine... closely followed by an energy bolt... and, I don't know why, but I can picture Leki shaking his head thinking "-idiots...". Oh well, that's life for ya'! xD
Can't wait for the epilogue!
Hope see you soon
Ja nE!
P.s: I wonder what crossed Orphen's mind when Cleo said that Darius was her first kiss...? ¬¬ Might be my imagination, but I see bloodshed xD

Good chapter, though i was hoping for some action, it was still good.

Loved thia chapter. Can't wait for the epilogue.

Hiyas Again! ^_^
So they're trpapped, in a cold mine, with few clothes and a compromising position to share body-heat... do I detect a prelude to something?... xD
I see things are getting interesting for our two stubborn block-heads; wonder how everything will turn out in the end. But most importantly, I'm dying of curiosity here waiting to know about this hurting cold past of little old Orphen!!
Hope see you soon
Ja nE!

Nice fic, i really liked it!

Grins. Very very nice. I loved that Orphen was keeping her warm and that he couldn't seem to think with her around. It was very sweet and I loved the imagery. Keep up the great work.

I like this story. The interaction between Cleo and Orphen was great and Majic is so true to character.

i really enjoy reading this chapter!
hope you we get another chapter soon..
hm, when are you going to update your other fic 'it's in the family'?
you haven't updated it since a very long time!