OOh i am totally rereading this cause I love it soo much. I laughed that he hears bells too. UPDATE SOON PLEASE!

i really love your stories! i think you should do some more Penny/Seaweed stories! update soon!

I love your story..so cute seeing IQ have a crush on Tracy and Link's jealousy :0)..hope you come back and update soon

this is really really good..you should really finish this up :D

I've just discovered this fic today, being relatively new to this fandom. You're such a great writer! Please please tell me what I can do to get you to update?!
And just so you know - you're to blame for me doing absolutely no work today!

Really good. Hope you get around to finishing!

so, if I BEGGED you to finish this, would you consider it? Cause this is one of the best fics I've read thus far and personally, I'm getting sick of finding all these great stories and having the authors not finish them. I love taht all the guys are falling over themselves for Tracy and that she's completely clueless about the whole thing. I like that Amber isn't a total b!tch, although she still needs to keep away from Link. And I like the way you write link. So, please don't give up on this story. Please. :D

this is the best hairspray fic EVER! you are an amazingly awesome writter

::SQUEE:: Mynuet, this is awesome! Penny and Seaweed are love. LOVE! Your Trink is amazing. I even love the way you make Amber not so mean - even though her mother is the devil through and through.

Your representation of the era including the taboos and 'propriety issue' is just beautiful. Even the Sex Ed. scene was done well. I hear the characters' voices inside my head when I read, lol. I feel so sorry for IQ, though. I hope that situation gets resolved neatly, if not happily. Your characterizations are so down pat! Corny is the cutest thing ever!

::practices hypnotism:: Keep writing, keep writing :)

Love your story this would be the first hairspray fanfic ive ever read

are you going to write more of this? please do! i love the corny/maybelle and IQ. keep on writing!

hm Amber at the end kind of confuses me lol hurry back

Another chapter with IQ as our narrator. Delightful choice.

His apprehension about Corny's chat is smart. The choice to make him her escort gives us the perfect eye into Tracy's character, as well as the necessary "she's changing right over there!" kind of heart-stopping-ness. It makes you squee.

The run-on sentence IQ gives us about her in the dress is pure ambrosia. Delightful.

Tracy's handling of the commercial is in-step, and both Corny and Amber's reactions are in-character. I see this coming from Amber, but the lack of body language in that last scene between Amber and Tracy really let it down. I didn't know how Tracy was taking it, and I really wanted to. I think IQ wanted to, as well. Was it possible for him to see her? I know she couldn't see him.

Anyway, the over-protectiveness of IQ was delightful and his voice as a narrator brings a whole level of nicety to this chapter. A success in nearly every way.

Excellent work.

Keep writing.

Ooh. I never caught the whole "sister he never had" detail on the first read-through. Now this chapter goes up a notch in wonderfulness.

I like the details about the pancakes and his willingness to have both her and himself eat. His slight distaste about his own first commercial is on-point. Tracy's constant denial of Link's affections also is simply delightful, even if she's upping the "just friends" stigma to "just siblings". Soon she'll have nowhere to go. :)

His last line is simply delightful. A wonderful choice to make.

I find nothing here that needs improvement. :)

Superb work.

Keep writing.

Lou Ann is a bit of an odd character. I'm not sure why you felt the need to include her, but she adds a level of "Girls, wake the frick up!" that you decide to incorporate here instead of an introspective realization on their parts. Of course, that can come later, so maybe Lou Ann is the stimulus. In any event, she's a weird choice, but a fun one. We'll see what becomes of her.

The pinky swear scene is nice, as is the bit with the Bad Girls. Detention works to give Penny the words she needs later, although I thought the Intro to Flirting 101 scene was a touch contrived. It was cute, but I couldn't quite see it realistically happening.

I like the details, the descriptions, and all the narration. The dialogue is equally natural.

Strong work.

Keep writing!