Wow... The two of them being separate entities never occurred to me before (although other people have caught onto that notion and do interesting things with it *coughmobiumshippingcough*). I like how you wove the two identities together in that they have similarities and differences existing at the same time. It's hard to yank them apart and stick one in the "Yami" category and the other in the "Atem" category. Really makes you think, doesn't it? Very nice fic :)

I still hate the end to YugiOh..im sorry, but to me it just sucked. yami died. the end.

That was really good.Hey,you should look at my avatar icon on my bio sometime.I think the picture would somewhat give you a mental image of this story.:)

Aw..that' sweet, yet so sad...

I have SO missed reading your fics! I LOVED THIS! It was so deep and Beautiful. ^_^ Awesome job!

BYE BYE!

Beautiful, sad and very indepth. Nice story. The last line is very touching.

Very good story. I loved it. I wish he hadn't felt the need to go. I think that all work is Soap Operas.

This is a really good story.. I loved the way you wrote how both Yami/Atem were joined together after Yugi put the puzzle together and how it was Yami who finally won and then when Yugi grew up not just in stature but emotionally did he realize that it was time for him to go. Thank you for writing this story...