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aida (avisa81@hotmail.com)
2009-11-14 . chapter 3
he he I like Draco he is funny
Doni
2009-09-18 . chapter 3
Oh my, now that is a manipulative mother! Loved it!
lgv
2009-07-05 . chapter 3
That was lovely, fun and sexy. I like your way of writing and it was fun to see a good (well kind of) Narcissa after all the stories where she's the top bich. Also, I liked the way you described vampirism and all that stuff, the bureaucracy thing was very fitting to the HP world and very realistic in every way. Nice job with this one! ;)
nuclearXsquid
2009-06-23 . chapter 3
I can totally imagine Lucius arriving in Madagascar with the Lemurs dacing around him and other crazy things.

I liked it, though. And the acronym for VAMPS.
yue no rei
2009-06-13 . chapter 3
Aw the ending was sort of surprising in a sweet way. Interesting short story, I didn't think it would be so much fun to read about a vampire Draco xD
Tamikolee
2009-05-14 . chapter 1
Hey, I just red this story and I loved it. I would love to see a sequel to it, you can do so much with it. I think Draco could really stir up trouble for the VAMP society and make the 'Queen" s life very complicated, We know how Draco does'nt like to conform. I think Ginny can become a little bit more desperate and try to catch Draco out as controling Harry. Anyway I loved this story, well done
Aikoss
2009-03-22 . chapter 3
ame tu fic, es genial!
faulted
2009-02-15 . chapter 3
aw, how cute :) that was a great ending... although i do fear that Draco will act negligently in the future if harry ever comes to any real harm--maybe you should do a sequel to allay my fears? lol jk jk
great story, keep up the good work! ^_^
sockpuppet82
2009-01-14 . chapter 3
awe!
so sweet :)
i thought this was going to be longer and at first i was thinking 'what? harrys' accepting it so quickly...' but now that i realize how short it is, it's so perfect!!
i liked the counceling scene!!
hearts ;)
sehne
2009-01-13 . chapter 3
Oh wow! That was absolutely amazing. I LOVED it. I would had never guessed who was the person that paid the vampire, that was just genious. Thank you for sharing this awesome fic, it will definitely go to my favorites. :D
SilverGreen98
2008-12-31 . chapter 3
Whoa, that was sneaky and sweet of Narcissa. Wouldn't Draco be embarassed though? Harry ceratinly would be if he saw. Anyhow, brilliant story!
LionsandDragons
2008-12-05 . chapter 1
Hey! I really like your stories. I've been reading you for about a year and you always have interesting and thought out content. I was hoping I could convince you to do another H/D vampire story. It doesn't have to be long, but I like all of your sex scenes and the beautiful dialouge you write. Vampire stories are my favorite, so I thought I would ask, if you have time. If you need more specific inspiration please drop me a line.

Love and Thanks,

Ash
debzzz
2008-11-26 . chapter 3
Wow I would have never thought that it was Narcissa who did this!I really love her character and now it actually makes total sense that she would do this to protect Draco!Nice fic and the ending was so so sweet!cheers
debzzz
2008-11-26 . chapter 2
Draco waited. After a moment, he helpfully thought, "See, I don’t think it gets better with distance at all."
Lol that was hilarious!!I really like this fic so far!I love the way you write Draco and although I'm not one for the creature!fics,vamparism works amazingly here!!
jtsbbsps-dk
2008-11-22 . chapter 3
Aw how sweet! A manipulative Narcissa rocks! :D
And Harry making Draco's heart beat, just simply 'Aw!'
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