hee hee!

Excellent, really kept me interested.

Good stuff! I think I did like the original (AFIA) a bit more, but Rob's POV in this is priceless! Great job centering on the thoughts in a single moment and drawing them out! Looking forward to reading more from you!

This chapter was cute but not as funny as the first. I wonder why she didn't concentrate on his physical prowess as much as Tim expected. I've noticed Robin's invincibility seems to be a common factor in these stories. Still very interesting and please continue.

Oh that is *so* rich! This was hysterical or at least so far. I'll probably review again in a few minutes after I check out Cassie's thoughts. That was really really funny. Although I don't think that Robin would be so harsh to Cassie or say some of those strange things (friggin crud monkeys?). But overall that was Great! This should be under humor!

I like this story. To be honest, I think Cassie and Tim would make a good couple.

"Oh God. She'll tell Cissie, and Cissie'll mention it to Bart, and Bart will tell . . . the entire free world." How true. Bless )

Okay, I hope there's a sequel to "Away and Away...Moments... :-)" Y'know, you can't leave us hanging like this... Nice work - and "real" too!

T

I loved this chapter too! I love how your writing reflects on relationships, especially between two members of the same team (family). I can see the friendship and respect growing before my eyes and it's a wonderful way to put things in perspective. I can almost see a romantic relationship happening (if Kon and Spoiler weren't in the picture anymore). Please keep up the great work!

This is why I have you on AuthorAlert and on my favorites list even though it only lists the first 10. I loved the original story but I think I like this better because of how you have written it from their separate POV's. Tim is absolutely hysterical but yet so human and young that it makes me smile. The thoughts running throughhis head are just classic! Keep it up!