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SPEEDY DOES NOT DIE EVER!

EVER EVER EVER EVER EVER EVER EVER EVER!

HE WILL BE IN THE COMICS 4EVER!

(pants and stops running in circles, callapses to the floor in a fit of coughs.)

Otherwise, (GASP) it was (PANT) great.

Update again soon, though change the format so your words aren't so close.

You've really caught my attention with this. I hope you continue, though I must say it was a little hard to follow at first because it's been a while since I've watched teen titans or even remember half of the heroes real names lol. I hope you continue with this

This story sounds like it has potential, but it was slightly confusing. I can understand that you wish to add mystery to the atomosphere, but there may be a slight too much ambiguity for one chapter. I don't mean to critisize, I thought the story was rather interesting. However, I'm not quite sure what to make of it being that it didn't give me much to go on. Great start though. I do hope you continue to write the story, perhaps I shall be slightly less confused as the it progress'. I love the idea of putting Speedy into the story: no one seems to do that in these fanfictions. Well done.

Respectively,

Serenity202