gorgeously written... i think there was a part where the tense was a bit odd but I can't remember now.
t-that was so sad though, really loved it.

I have no idea what to say. When I leave reviews, I try not to gush, and instead offer some sort of critque that I hope the author will find helpful but -- there isn't really anything I do say here except sing your praises. That was haunting, sad, and absolutely beautiful. And... well, I can't really say anything else. That was amazing, and thank you so much for sharing!

did you know that the first time i read this, i really feel the tears coming out...hehe...
anyway...keep it up...i love your story... :]

Most of me doesn't understand why you would have two chapters; the second basically repeating (if not expanding just a little) the first. Yet I choose to believe that this is intentional; that it somehow echoes what Shinji has gone through.

It reads so coldly.