What do you mean 'it isn't very good?' I thought it was lovely myself - a really nice way to describe something we've all imagined quite often. "Somewhere between a memory and a dream..." very eloquent way to put it. Keep writing.

I really enjoyed this!
I think Esme and Edward may have been a bit too formal with each other, but that's just an opinion. There are plenty of stories in Edward's POV, but they are not usually very good.
This has to be one of the most well-written I've read to date! You've captured his...essence (wrong word, but you get the idea).
Great Job!

-Alice C.

Very sweet. nearly reminds me of the little precious moment drawings. just really nice I like it and I'll look for more from you!

~Katie

Wow that was really well written-you could almost see the scene of Edward at the Piano and hear the Lullaby.

I think you did an excellent job portraying Edward and Esme. Also, I applaud your focus: one of the most sentimental things about the twilight series is Edward's music, but Stephanie can't take much time to dwell on the quiet moments. You've done a fabulous job...