What a lovely hurt comfort story. I always love it when Dean worries over Sam. :0) Gidget

That was great! I love how Sam was all "How was your day?" at the end!

Little correction: it's nauseous, not nautious(When Dean was checking Sam's head).

Anywho, this was great, I really enjoyed reading it!!

I never saw this one until now. A very nice story - again, a sweet fix for someone looking for protecive big bro Dean and hurting little bro Sam.

Good story! Is there more or has this one passed by? I vote for more:)

This was well done! I liked it.
Only thing is, it doesn't feel like an ending ... which I guess just means you need to write more!

I loved it, the frist chapter was my favorite... is it really over??

Recycling bin? LMAO!! Great story...loved it. Sam trying to get out of telling Dean what happened - hilarious.

Although my DD says you are mean by ending it before finding out what Dean was thinking when Sam got a hold of him and picked him up.

Complete? Please continue - maybe some limpSam and/or more with the Wendell's buddies..?

I like this!

Hey Sweetie
first up I loved your little fic, especially the first chapter, well written and full of action, poor Sammy I can really see that happening just the way you wrote it. The only thing that would have made this story from excellent to fantastic is that you made chapter two a little longer, to continue Dean's POV up until he found Sam. You started off so well but then it just stops and I was kept wondering about the time in between Dean being stuck in the traffic to him finding Sam. And what about the guys chasing Sam?
You have the makings of a great multi-chapter story here, if you wanted to go in further into what happened with Sam and Dean when they get back to the motel, what if they were followed by the men? Watching Sam to get to him now his is hurt and vulnerable. Kicking in big brother protectiveness in Dean.
Just a suggestion anyway,
keep writing
hugs Shelly