i like this story. it is very well written good plot. but i dont understand why you are showing us the bounty hunters being tortured unless you plan for one or both of them to be rescued.

this story is so cool words can't even describe it keep on updating

i really hope that you arent just coming back only to give up again.
but anyways, really looking forward to the continuation :D

Wow! I'm so envious of your talent for writing; please update this story whenever you can [:
(Best Naruto/doujutsu story I've ever read...)

Hey man i have a piture of the Makaze Mangekyou. Go to http://forums./image.php?u=280286&type=sigpic&dateline=1243567196

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I absolutely love this story! It's totally awesome written and I like the fact that Naruto is made so great. *Evil laugh*
Anyway, its a great story plotline that has ju craving for more! Awesome job!

Cool story.

great story the concept of your story is really cool.

You're story is freakin awesome one of the best I've read in a long time you gota continue

Thanks for updating. I love Itachi's small moments :)

Your story is slightly weird it goes from horrifyingly depressing to humorous back to depressing but It IS ABSOLUTELY AWESOME. Although killing off the girl from wave in such a brutal way was over kill it was so sad it actually made my cat cry...Although that might have been because it was plai9ng in pepper but probably not anyway I was wondering is there a official pairing yet or are you gonna wait till he dies and meets that girl again at the end of the story.? Any way UPDATE SOON YEAH!

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can't wait for you to finish this arc and start the next one ^^

I love your story! Please continue to update consistently!

hey this is a good story and all but i was wondering..is it ever gonna get updated?! and also if the length of time each chapter takes to get updated is this long i dont think i can keep reading this as after this new chapter comes out i dont think i'll be able to remember the rest of the story!
Please get back to me soon.

Good story! Please update soon!