GORGEOUS! I love the ending so much. For some reason this almost made me cry!

Aw! That was amazing! TE he... I can just see Meg standing there... hahah... good job!

*grins* a nice story, i must say, i quite enjoyed it. good job!

Your friend,

Tansy

That was awesome!

I usually don't read Erik/Meg, but you do such a good job of writing it...

Anywho, beautiful story! I always love your descriptions; you do such a wonderful job of capturing the emotions of the charcacters without having them say anything.

I love it!

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I love it, instant favorite.

Need I ask when Devotion shall be updated?

I like it! Erik's conflict is believable-really, with all these girls around, it would not be surprising that he had other infatuations. The second to last paragraph is especially vivid, with the scene of Erik advancing upon Meg like a frightening shadow-really, almost humorous in the way Meg reacts. Good job!