such beautiful words

Wow. Excellent work, I liked this a lot. You have a good balance of the light and dark, thank you :)

A nice little story. Ever the quick wit and playful comeback lines.

This is a lovely story. You should write more angst. You do it well, just the right touch, light, not overdone and you leave some blanks for the reader to complete. Nice, intelligent writing. Please do it again.

well done! Angst without being too soapy, this was very creative and I enjoyed it very much.

Thanks for posting and I look forward to more from you.