 leaf the invisible 2009-10-01 . chapter 32Beautiful, Sweet and gentle and a great ending, Wraps it up nicely...
Sad to see this go, but glad to see the ending work out so well.
~Leaf~ |
 infinityinmirrors 2009-09-30 . chapter 32Congratulations! I don't think any review i could leave would do this story justice. Thank you for so much time and effort, and for such an amazing series. It will remain as one of my favorites for a long time to come. I can't wait to read more of your stories, Gaia only knows that they're worth it <3 Much love and thanks again |
 Skylara 2009-09-30 . chapter 32I can't believe it's over. I almost feel like crying. It's been a constant part of my life to read this series of stories since you started writing them...almost, as I started part way into the first I believe. My only question, is did Vincent grow old and pass like Cid did? It doesn't officially say, only that Cid retired to Rocket Town until his death, not that Vincent did. |
 leaf the invisible 2009-09-27 . chapter 31Wow! Delicious smut. and a great end to the chapter with Zack. Glad to see he'll be okay in his own way. hehe, Seph can't help not being soft in the right places -winks-
Very nice. Happy birthday to the Arc! and Wow...It's almost done!
~Leaf~ |
 leaf the invisible 2009-09-24 . chapter 30awe...Loz has someone too yay! and This was a mix of adorable and sad and sexy and I was amused! Very nice!
~Leaf~ |
 leaf the invisible 2009-09-21 . chapter 29Adorable. I liked each of those snippets. Very nice ^^ and Sephy in glasses is very sexy to imagine. Excited for the next chapter!!
~Leaf~ |
 leaf the invisible 2009-09-19 . chapter 28This was a good chapter. Felt really bad for Archer there. But I'm glad people are starting to see reason. It really does have that feel of drawing towards the end though! Sad! But it's been such a good series to follow! ^^
~Leaf~ |
 leaf the invisible 2009-09-15 . chapter 27Beautiful. There was a tiny smidge of happy in there..-winks- But It was a sad chapter. but Good..I liked it, Sephiroth is growing too. That's awesome. ^^
~Leaf~ |
 Jill 2009-09-12 . chapter 26 Ah, good. More Archer/Kadaj. It's starting to make more sense now... how they got to know each other and all. And Kadaj kissed him! Yay!
Also, Loz's point of view was tremendous. I liked the playful attitude you gave him, and I especially loved the last part:
"And Loz honestly, desperately prayed to whatever god would listen for fate to have some mercy on them. For Kadaj's pure heart and Yazoo's gentle spirit if anything else. And maybe, if there was a bit left over, spare some for him as well."
That was really touching. Well, looking forward to your next chapter! :D |
 leaf the invisible 2009-09-12 . chapter 26awe I liked the whole interlude with this. Very nicely done and I love how Archer and Kadaj interact...It's great!
~Leaf~ |
 leaf the invisible 2009-09-12 . chapter 25Very emotional chapter, but a good one. A lot of things for them all to work through. Good job! Can't believe how long it's been since you started this series!
~Leaf~ |
 infinityinmirrors 2009-09-10 . chapter 25You keep making me cry! D= its not fair! Everyones just so sad, even the somewhat happy things seem bittersweet! Hopefully things will start looking up soon, i don't think i can handle many more of these tear-jerking chapters! |
 Jill 2009-09-09 . chapter 25 Another fantastic chapter! I can't believe the arc is almost over, though... Four years? Whoa. I'll be waiting for the 12th of September now-- thanks for giving me something to look forward to! :D |
 Lidian 2009-09-08 . chapter 24 Gah, words escape me! That was totally *epic*! And beautifully written, might I add. |
 leaf the invisible 2009-09-06 . chapter 24...Marlene Made me cry...I could hear her voice. And Cloud almost made me cry when he showed up at home... -pouts- However you did BEAUTIFULLY with this chapter. Very wonderful. I'm happy with how you did this. XD
~leaf~ |