This is actually really great! Made me laugh several times. Sad to see it's been a year since an update, and hoping a review will motivate another out of you.

for someone that does not like Penelo (at all) this made me laugh, and like her a lot more =)
Your writing is flawless from what I've read. But then again, I don't have english as my main language. Might've missed something, I don't know. I think this was hilarious and awesome to read anyway.

Ah, and didn't Penelo cook a malboro in one of the earlier chapters? Maybe I just read it wrong? Ah, nevermind, I think she did boil malboro, though.

I look forward to the next chapter ^^

XD This is truly amazing, I haven't laughed out loud over a fic in ages! This is win condenced into fanfiction form and i really can't wait for more! There aren't enough words in the dictionary to describe how awesome this is! XD

Hell, I'd even aim for Larsa, even though there's a good chance I'd crush him. Anyone but Vaan. :\

Hah! Penelo's love for Balthier...And Vaan's love for Balthier (moment of cheering from shameless BalVaan fan 8D).

Still hasn't lost its cute, funny charm. Away to chapter four!

Full of much lulz. I appreciated the more serious entry, though. I like how this is showing a side of street-smart Penelo we never see, but know it exists SOMEWHERE.

Loving this. Very funny, and I loved the entry Vaan wrote. XDD

LOL - Nalbina can definitely wait. Great description of the effects of stabbing a Malboro that is also being zapped with lightning.

*wanders off, still chuckling*

I love this so far! It's funny and the grammar is perfect! (Sorry about the 'gramar is perfect part', but I've read some good fics with bad grammar and felt the need to highlight your excellent grammar.)

whats with the vaan bashing

I love love love love love this fic. I can so totally imagine Penelo writing all that in the game since I only ever use Basch, Balthier and Ashe too to beat up all the monsters. (snickers) Poor Pen!

This is HI-larious! Also, Vaanelo for eternity.

Very cute! I love Penelo's diary. It is funny and very interesting. I look forward to the next chapter.

Wooh! This chapter was touching. Aww Poor Aiden, poor kid. It would've been cool if Penelo had taken him--she could acted as his aunty and Ashe could be his mommy but alas . . . they couldn't. Ha! Vaan getting his butt toasted trying to save Penny is priceless!

Ha, I love reading about Vaan getting into retarded situations--it really makes my day, thanks. ^_^

- TBP

This just keeps on getting funnier and funnier. You know, for some reason Basch snoring seems to actually be very fitting for him--at least to me. Ha, Reks was hot.

Keep it up, oh man that was hilarious!