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Reviews for: Black Cloud
Melodic
2009-03-14 . chapter 6
I'm really liking this story, please carry-on writing it, I can't wait to see what happens!
Maverick500
2008-03-12 . chapter 6
Excellent chapter. Is Michelle gonna be alright, and will Jack take Chloe's revelation
Maverick500
2008-02-07 . chapter 5
I like this so far. Is Maria gonna make another play for Jack
cybertoothtiger
2008-01-28 . chapter 4
Oh, man. How could I have missed this? You write so well. Such great descriptions. Great attention to detail. The scene with Jack watching Chloe sleep was so good, I could almost accept that they got together. *g*

I can't wait to read what's next. And hey, wasn't Curtis from Boston? It's cool to send him back there.
madeofporcelain
2008-01-20 . chapter 3
Quite obviously, I loved it, loved it, loved it! Please update soon.
madeofporcelain
2008-01-18 . chapter 2
I have just finished reading Mutual Purposes and after reading this, I can't wait to see what Jack has been keeping from Chloe. Update soon!
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