You should become an hero.

One thing wrong. You spelt "sayounara" sayonara. Otherwise, pretty good fic. Not that big of a one shots. AND THIS IS NOT A TRUE STORY!

The next time your brother teleports something to Saitama, teleport me instead! lol XD

I'm just wondering why the text is all centered. It's very hard to read. I'm going to point out some. Cain's statement of "It's in the city of Kasukabe. Oh, I remember! It's in the Saitama Prefecture" is kinda topsy-turvy. If he remembered, then Saitama should come first before Kasukabe. Oh yeah before I forget, Konata's hometown is in Satte; not in Kasukabe (just a reminder not a correction of some sort). Kasukabe is where the girls meet to go to school.

Despite several grammatical errors, you've done a wonderful job. Give my regards to your brother that the next time he teleports something, teleport me instead lol. I wanna see Konata first-hand.