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Broken Sexed Up Bloody Kitten
2009-07-04 . chapter 5
Loved. Update ASAP please!
animegeek
2009-02-18 . chapter 5
this is really good! please update soon!lookin' forward to it!
Kaz-za-15
2009-01-04 . chapter 5
This is really unique and interesting. And baby Naruto is so cute!
takuya
2008-11-21 . chapter 5
oh i like this story i really hope you can update soon
SHeWithNoName
2008-06-29 . chapter 5
oh snap. what is he going to do?
Danielle Mullen
2008-06-21 . chapter 5
Poor Sasuke, it must have been awful to return to his home without feeling the love of his family.
As I read this story, I noticed how he tried to be loving to the infant. It was fascinating how the baby would open his eyes right after Sasuke would open his
Kaira-chan15
2008-03-30 . chapter 5
Aww it was so nice of Sasuke to remember what Kakashi said and to save the boy from the lightning. That was very original, I've never read a fanfiction where Sasuke did that before. ^_^ I loved the end, especially the last line, I really can't wait to read more! :D
cast14
2008-03-16 . chapter 5
Great story i loved it
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Tony WildRiver
2008-03-15 . chapter 5
ah, a Sasuke chapter. You portray his state of mind quite well. Question: What do the chapter titles mean? Excited to see how this plays out! ^_^
Dragon77
2008-03-15 . chapter 5
I Love it chapter 5 was great and I know chapter 6 will be even better so update soon.
blindfaith4hope
2008-03-14 . chapter 4
that was very well written and can't wait for next chapter
Tony WildRiver
2008-03-13 . chapter 4
..interesting... I am intrigued. Kinda hoping that the Konoha ninjas will be able to forgive him. He needs to get his little boy back ^_^ Big brother Sasuke is such a cute idea. Next chapter please!
cast14
2008-02-09 . chapter 4
Great story i loved it i hope you will update this story i can't wait to find out what will happen next
Dragon77
2008-02-09 . chapter 4
Great chapter! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
Kaira-chan15
2008-02-09 . chapter 4
I really loved the following lines:
“Even when he’s dead,” Sasuke decides, “he’s still trying to bring me back.”

The wind whispers songs into her ear, lullabies that she wishes are true.

So Sakura leaves this time, and it is Sasuke's turn to just watch.

The stone of memory thing was kool. ^_^ I really liked this chapter, nice job! It was very well written. Oh, and I absolutely adored this part:

Her eyes tell him a story of pain and fake cover-ups, of wanting to start over. Of trying to start over. Of almost succeeding, until he had to come again. Green, the color of life and rebirth. Haruno Sakura; cherry-blossom of the Spring, ready to start anew whenever she must.

His eyes tell her a story of pain and risks, of wishing he could start over, but never actually trying over because of one failure. Once he tried, once he failed, never did he try again. Black, the color of darkness and failure and depression. Uchiha Sasuke; a paper fan, a legend, a destined killer.
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