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| Mcalison 2008-02-03 ch 7,  | abuseAwesome story, can't wait for more! |
| IluvPeterPetrelli 2008-01-18 ch 7, | abuseI am a little sad to see it end. This story was so sweet. Danny, would so be wrapped around his daughters finger, from the ultrasound. Cant wait for more stories. |
| nikki.02 2008-01-18 ch 7, | abuseOh, it's the end...well, you wrapped this up very well and you wrote a great 'angry and hormonal' Lindsay. "...not even an hour old and not afraid to fight." Perfect ending line! |
| gwen24 2008-01-18 ch 7, | abusegreat chapter and end. i love that the baby's middle name is joy, that's so sweet, although i would have prefered her name joy aiden, but that's me and doens't change the fact that it was a great story all along. ;) |
| ncisabbylover 2008-01-17 ch 7, | abusei liked it thanks abbylover |
| laurzz 2008-01-17 ch 7, | abuseyou already know what i think. Just posting because i can.. And cause you rock! Aha, tricks up the sleeve. liking the sounds of that! |
| TatianaMik 2008-01-17 ch 7, | abuseI liked the ending of this story. I mean it was sad, but ended alright in the end. |
| nikkilou 2008-01-17 ch 6, | abuseI love this storiy. In fact every story of yours, I have really enjoyed. Only problem is that you sent out a chapter seven for this one and I can't seem to be able to get the page up. Is there anyway that you can send it so that I can read? |
| gwen24 2008-01-16 ch 6, | abusei love your new story, it's really good, but i hope youre not giving up on baby makes 3! ;) |
| TatianaMik 2008-01-15 ch 6, | abuseI love that the boys were asking about Danny rubbing Lindsay's belly. Glad Jason is out of the picture. |
| ncisabbylover 2008-01-15 ch 6, | abuseomg poor montana but dannys there for her great work but dont leave us hanging love abbylover |
| TatianaMik 2008-01-15 ch 5, | abuseoh Jared is back. Wouldn't his DNA be in CODIS since he's a felon? Or is his DNA in the massive backlog of stuff that hasn't been entered? |
| laurzz 2008-01-15 ch 5, | abuseYou know what i think of it :) but still. on the driveway. aww! :) |
| nikki.02 2008-01-15 ch 4, | abuseFantastic update! You captured both of their reactions to the 'tragedy' extremely well and I love this ending line - "They had a tragedy happen to them today, but in the midst of it all, they found out about one of the biggest joys in life". Fits perfectly. |
| ncisabbylover 2008-01-14 ch 4, | abusesoo good, yeah i agree lindsay isnt the kind of person to sit back and play victim great work i love it cant wait for more love abbylover |