omg when Uryuu fell i thought that Ichigo wasn't gonna get him up lol this was a touching fic i loved it :)

Your story if good and well formulated, you have a good language and vocabulary.
But I think that you would benefit from not writhing in first person on both characters.
If you did that it would be a lot easyer to understand your story to the fullest.

Have a nice day or evening which ever.

me like this story its kind of depresing till the end :)

This was so touching and sad. I thank for a second Ishida was going to die and I cried. In the end he live and found love; I'm so happy about that. Now he has something to live for! Awesome story.

this was... AWSOME!

It was both sad and fluffy.
Nice story!

that was quite touching... but ppl shudn't go do such depressing things on xmas day!! *sob*

Heyy! Love it like all your other stories you are writing! I still have to finish my own with Toshiro. Hopefully I can put the first chapter down! ^^

i'm so happy for ishida!

Aw! That's so cute! The end makes up for the "Ishida's a depressed emo" start. :D (Sorry, I REALLY hate it when people write Ishida as emo... D< ) A great fic :) That's one hell of a xmas pressy, XD

It was nice, but the rating is too high. A T would suffice.

Hey! Great story! I loved it! Keep up the good work!