These would all have horrible effects on the gameplay if the difficulty of p2 was used... but if it wasn't, I do like the cavemin idea, and the enemies, but...

"So what if there were three boxes to choose pikmin from? A “Leaf” box, a “Bud” box, and a “Flower” box."

That seems like a cheap and unnecessary shortcut, how many fans have actually thought, "I wish there was a way to pick the plant type you want"? It's always the flowers that come out first regardless. If you want more, don't bring out 100 pikmin to begin with!

From one Pikmin fan to another, this was good and innovative work. Especially the taking onions down into caves, the onion damage, and the revised controls. Can you come up with some bosses?

todaly agry all this stuff belive it or not makes sence no crap(my vertion of joke) but I onaly own pikmin1 so get working nintindo.

I actually like this chapter, makes sense, but I have four complaints.

1) I think you should have put pinks somewhere on there.

2) The whole affect creature when eaten thing has been taken by whites.

3) Bulbmin are a sub-type.

4) You do realize that the whole tear-apart-the-game-with-night=play problem has been fixed so many times, right? People, including me, have come up with the idea of the captains only being able to do it every five or so days because they need some sleep, and your other pikmin are still in danger, so sundown IS a rush time.My black pikmin idea only lets half of them survive when left behind, anyway.

Very interesting. I like several of these. Have you consider presenting this to a group of Pikmin theorists at Pikmin Wiki or somewhere like that?

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You know, I never thought of it until I read this story, bu you are right! The Bulbmin are te "freaks" of the Pikmin world! Next time one comes in my story, mocking will insue. You are a genious! Long live the emperor, indeed!

could you please do another

Fascinating, better than the list ones. I argue for this chapter and the previous one.

The leaf pikmin move more slowly, which doesn't mean they spend more time in the air. No, their feet/roots would go deeper in the ground and spend more time in the ground.

For this one I ask of you: do you not see that the pikmin mostly head-butt the creatures? That is why a red does more damage.

I'd expect flowers to have the BEST photosynthesis. Don't flowers traditionaly have better photosyntesis than leafs?

Interesting theories, you present them quite well. Maybe jazz it up a bit by italicizing and seperating parts, make it look more like a field book ya know?

Also pikminicus colourus goldentius, azulus etc, seems a bit... odd. Maybe improve the scientific names (Keep pikminicus and get rids of colourus)

All in all pretty good, keep it up.

Chapter names, good! I always thought that flowers would be BETTER at photosynthesis. It sounds a little like my Minstools. I never would have thought of them getting enery... from their feet touching the ground? Well, keep up the good work, and I'll continue to review for you!

No one reviews MY story... Anyway, this is doing good. Just make sure these therories aren't too weird for even the world of Pikmin. Keep writing, and get good ratings and reviews from the only people who still come here.

You just happened to update this, while I was reading my E-mail!

I like this, but are you implying that whites are albino purples? It would make sense, since albinism makes it difficult for plants to photosynthesise, if they can at all, so they would be smaller, or even die, usually. I however, have my own theories, too simple for a story. I think I'll put it in the forums. Keep up the good work, and I'll continue to review for you!

I know, I have the official blog favourited. This is really starting to degenerate into a sort of list, maybe you could do something else?