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| weasles 'n cherryblossoms 2008-01-30 ch 1,  | abusethis was awsom. icant even describe it. a few grammer mistakes here and there but nothing major. |
| Ashen Rose Shadow 2008-01-08 ch 1, | abuseI really like how this story came together. I always think of Itachi as the type that perfers to fight with his mind (probably because of the eyes lol). Perhaps he let Sakura live because her torture was so much worse that way. What fun would it be for him to kill someone who was contemplating their own death anyway? Its terrifying the way Itachi can stroll right into the village. I love the way you wrote this piece, breaking it up into Sakura's most important moments. Wonderful work!! |
| Kyoshi7989 2008-01-08 ch 1, | abuseHm...interesting piece. I really enjoy the main body of the story, but I think there's something to be desired at to how you ended it (mainly the last sentence). However, I still think you pulled off the entire ItaSaku thing in a very likely and enjoyable way. Nicley done. |
| iruka92 2008-01-08 ch 1, | abusesmexy smexy itachi. his coldness is way ~ *faints* |
| Angelusfaith 2008-01-08 ch 1, | abuseVery deep , powerful even.The way Ttachi spares her shows that even if just the tinyest bit he cares for her or if not just pitys her.Amazing. |