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darkatsu midnight
2009-11-02 . chapter 8
ha bandaid
darkatsu midnight
2009-11-02 . chapter 6
SCREAM ONTHE TOP OF HER LUNGS AT 6 13 IN THE MORNING AT THE ** CLFFHANGER WAKING UP THE HOUSE LOL
hides from room mate with lappy top uner mah bed lmao0
ha ha ha shes gonna kill me lol
darkatsu midnight
2009-11-02 . chapter 5
MORE NOW ONWARD!
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darkatsu midnight
2009-11-02 . chapter 4
HAWTNESS
ew misa yuck
light and l kiss? YESH!HAWT WHOOT
darkatsu midnight
2009-11-02 . chapter 3
im in love with a killer
*sings to the tune of in love with a stripper*
he evil hes quirky
the way he eats his jelly lol
i love l too butmost of all i love bb x light so ONWARD
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darkatsu midnight
2009-11-02 . chapter 2
he DEMANDS PANCAKES BUWA HA HA HA HA
lol nice l bribing light for pancakes lol
btw loved the whole thing so far
ONWARD
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darkatsu midnight
2009-11-02 . chapter 1
...speechless
ArtistOfLight
2009-07-12 . chapter 9
i love this fic! its great, you always have something uexpected and i never would have guessed light would realise the "demon with his face" was in fact kira. especially with how he was so adamant about being innocent. any way i love this chapter and i can't wait to read the next one!
silverfox
2009-07-12 . chapter 9
YAY! ^.^ You updated! I almost didn't realize it until I saw your story at the top of the Death Note list. I really liked this chapter, but I have no idea where you are going to take L's new plan. I feel so bad for Light, he has NO idea about the monster in him. oh, well. I hope you update again soon!
friggengoddamnit
2009-07-01 . chapter 7
This is ** amazing! I'm so happy that I came across it! you writing style is extremely unique... I've really never read anything quite like this in my entire life. It seriously pains me to see how screwed up L is and how much Light wants to be with him...

Also, FANTASTIC portrayal of Beyond. In other stories I've read... yeahh... the authors delicately hinted to his insanity and goriness, but they way YOU wrote about him was so ** up that I got nauseas when he stuck the swiss in the finger. Wow. Nice work. I'm so excited to read on, (as I am writing this after finishing 'G'.)

I KNOW I will not be disappointed. Thank you very much for writing this.
Urae
2009-07-01 . chapter 9
The update notice for this was a very, very pleasant surprise in my inbox! :3 Anyway..
That. Was. Amazing.
It's twisted to say this, methinks, but I love how broken and cynical L is. He's so human in his fears and emotions, something that we never saw of him in the canonverse. It's really moving, and very refreshing to see him so vulnerable and crushed.
Congratulations on your graduation, by the way! :3
tebrighteyes
2009-07-01 . chapter 9
I love this I'm so glad you updated! I think this is my favorite Death Note fic at the moment. Can't wait for the rest!
Kermitfries
2009-06-30 . chapter 9
Oh my god! New Chapter :)

It was a good update. And I'm so happy you've stuck with this story, because it's a really great literary piece - which is rare at times on this site. I look forward to the next update.
Spottedstar106
2009-06-30 . chapter 9
B next chapter? YAY! *pumps fist in the air*

Spottedstar106
Riku-Aura777
2009-06-30 . chapter 9
Really interesting chapter. But I think your formatting got screwed up quite a bit. For one, there were no quotation marks, which made things confusing, and some end sentences lacked punctuation. Were you using something new, like notepad? Just curious.

Well... moving along, it's great to see you update again. I'm looking forward to the next one, and hopefully you can get everything right again punctuation-wise.

Update whenever.
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