Wait, did he dematerialize away from her or toward her? I am slightly confused. If he left her there I am screaming on the inside.

i love it! please continue!

Cool, Rose's point of view. Please update this one soon, I would really appreciate it.

I cannot believe I haven't read this before. It's seemingly perfect. The angst and the soulful wishing of the Doctor unfurl this story so beautifully. I really hope there's more... can there be more please?

Amazing.

xx Lola

I'm loving it at the moment. Great discription and use of both frequently and non-frequently used words.

xD Keep writing!! I cant wait to read more!!

Sara .x.

How cute he is an adorable doctor.
Maria

oh, i think i may like where this is going... yes... I need my doctor who fix until the new series comes out.. >>;;

this is so nice. well written. short chapters but i LUV short chapters for some reasons, so it doesn't really matter.

Very cute yet somewhat sad... I loved the story though. Good job!

Liked it... :D

Many thanks,

Atheniandream