nice you should continue

You really need to learn proper punctuation if you ever want to succeed at writing.

Best of luck!

-Meyham

please write another chapter soon

lol, nice but u made an error ^^: 'Tohru smiled as she hugged him' wouldn't he have transformed there ^^. oh well, just keep it in mund for later. Oh and I believe Momiji switched the skirt for shots when he wears the uniform, but oh well. nice job, twas cute.

you got my atention~ I love Yoai... ^-^ KyoXYuki, ToriXAya, NaohitoXMomiji (

i love momiji! he is so cute! and yun-yun and kyo-kyo make a cute couple. i love this story! please update soon!

Please hurry and update!
I can't wait, this was so good!=D
I was so excited i couldn't stop from smiling to myself!
HA HA

You've got a few typos but I still really enjoyed reading this story. Update soon! I love Yuki/Kyo and I'm intrigued now that Momiji is getting a love letter!

O! Momiji's got a love letter! Can't wait to find out who it's from.

I love the story so far. its getting really good. please update soon. =3

Yes! This was very good! So glad you finished it, and nicely too!

awesome, and i want more.

I liked it
it was cute

Aw!So cute!It would be awsome if you wrote more!Pwease?

Hm... Not bad, not bad at all. But, you should make another chapter explaining when they kissed the first time and you could end it with Yuki's fainting.