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| Maggalicious 2008-04-28 ch 2,  | abuseI like it so far and i am wondering who the slash could end up as, it could go so many ways at this point. Update soon |
| Polkadot-Sunstar 2008-03-22 ch 2, | abuseI like this so far, I hope you update soon! -Sunstar (: |
| The-Fan-Who-Lived 2008-02-18 ch 2, | abuseThis is REALLY good. Its going to be Pony/Johnny right? Hey i dont mind i would love it! LOL short angry pony, I WOULD BE LAUGHING MY ASS OFF! its mean but true! Keep Updating! Happy Writing!! |
| lisa freak-girl 2008-01-20 ch 2, | abuseaw...that was cute. Ponyboy is dam cute! Update soon! |
| Deanaholic1 2008-01-18 ch 2, | abuseREALLY REALY AWESOME...GOOD JOB..UPDATE SOON |
| Purified Darkness 2008-01-17 ch 1, | abuseBTW peeps... TWTTIN means, That Was Then This Is Now. Post The Outsiders. |
| Purified Darkness 2008-01-17 ch 2, | abusePutting this on alert, well favorites since I never check my e-mail. I'm looking forward to seeing this story grow. |
| Hahukum Konn 2008-01-09 ch 1, | abuseHi, This seems like a decent start. A few minor word substitution errors are present, though, such as "unexpected increase on money" where you either mean "unexpected increase OF money" or "unexpected increase IN money". I see you've also updated the fic from 1966 to 2006/7; you should make that a bit more clear, as "modern fic" by itself doesn't convey that, IMO. Perhaps in your author note or summary put something like "AU/Updated to 2006"? I'l keep an eye on this one since the slash could go any which way, eh? :) |
| Deanaholic1 2008-01-08 ch 1, | abusereally good..update soon..what does twttin mean? |
| black lady knight 2008-01-08 ch 1, | abuseTWTTIN? what's that? also what will your slash pairings be? |