Yay Shakespeare! Onwards, though.

Oh, wow. Okay, retrospective review. Cripes. Snipping…

“The love felt in the bonds of blood became real as shackles.”
- So lovely in the wording, and it reminds me of the song Katia-darling chose for Shigure. There was a line about… there. “These bonds are shackle free.” Nothing much to do with it, just… pretty webs.

“It didn’t matter that love forced on an unwilling recipient is a burden to bear rather than a precious gift to celebrate.”
- So perfect. Again with your way with words, and it’s such a theme in Furuba, so it just - you know. Associations again.

“It didn’t matter that it oppressed the Juunishi-cursed every bit as much as the forced clinging suffocated the personality of the girl Akito had been born.”
- Just yes. Everyone, with the suffocating. It’s a well-made point. Especially with…

“All the spirits asked of the children possessed was that they love, and be silent.”
- Utter pwnage of ending lines. So haunting and perfect and thematic. Pwnage of themes, too, with the entire fic - suffocating is the best word…

I have no idea where you get YoUR ideas from, but i think they should keep coming on and on! ^^ Keep up the good work!

This is by far the loveliest Fruits Basket drabble I have ever come across. This challenge although it doesn't sound like it at first perfectly suits the Juunishi. The beginning and ending held a nice... effect and pace.

Superb.