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Old Fiat
2009-10-27 . chapter 1
Okay... You nearly made me cry with this. It was... it was just beautiful. You captured so many different types of love--the love for a sister, the love for a... lover (though I hate that word) and the love a child. It was really amazing. I adored it. I think the bit with Ted (as in, Tonks) was my favorite. That one really nearly made me cry. It was truly amazing.

I don't really have that much to say about this. It was all really great. Wonderful, wonderful work. I'll be remembering this story for quite some time. :)
WriterInTraining713
2009-10-13 . chapter 1
Really, really, really good!
Steel Scorpion
2009-10-06 . chapter 1
This is really beautiful. I love all your stories, this one and A Keen Observer in particular. You have a real talent for portraying the Black Family. Thanks so much for writing.

<3 Steel Scorpion
Espoir Noir
2009-07-13 . chapter 1
Beautiful! I loved it.I have no criticism, and I can't even pick a favourite section. IT's just perfect. Thank-you!
vetgirl1293
2009-06-28 . chapter 1
Fantastic. :D
Cassandra30
2009-05-15 . chapter 1
Simple, lovely story. So bittersweet.
Jasminny
2009-03-06 . chapter 1
wonderfully written.
it's simply perfect.
i don't know how to
praise it any more:]
madbrad
2008-12-19 . chapter 1
Very nice. I'm glad you finished this one on a positive note!
theotherweasley
2008-11-24 . chapter 1
oh, wow. That was amazing. Having just reread A Keen Observer, this seems an amazingly sad but fitting resolution for Andromeda. I love it!
Cenlyra
2008-10-14 . chapter 1
I'm going to cry. This was so good, I'm tearing up.
Youko-Kokuryuuha
2008-09-26 . chapter 1
Ah, another good one. There are a few typos in the beginning, but I"ll attribute that to your disability to sleep. Yes, well, it was a nice drabble, and the promise of a better tomorrow after years of heartbreak closed it off well. Nicely done, again.

~Koky
Wackysocks
2008-09-20 . chapter 1
Oh how sad! I liked this so much - it very much chronicles the heartbreak that Andromeda went through.
ahoyhoy
2008-08-16 . chapter 1
Again, my mouth is hanging open in the wake of your awesome writing ability. Seriously!
HallowedInk
2008-07-03 . chapter 1
Ooh, sweet. I loved how you built it up, first her sisters, then her husband, then her daughter, but gave it a happy ending anyway. Well done! A good little compilation.
-Halo
bmdohmen
2008-06-21 . chapter 1
"...she will not say goodbye, not to her only child." "Again, it is Kingsley who comes."

I have tears dripping off my chin, and a pain in my heart. You did such a wonderful job on this story.
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