 xXxRainxXxDancerxXx 2008-05-13 . chapter 10Hey Missy,
How come you haven't updated this?
Last time you updated was FEBUARY!
it is now MAY! There's a 2 Month diffrence!
UPDATE PLEASE! |
 anaraz 2008-05-11 . chapter 10so sad |
 Tsubame 2008-02-08 . chapter 1This is such a sweet story! Can't wait to read on! |
 mandapandabug 2008-02-07 . chapter 10you know... it wasn't the worst, but i have seen better from you! they were a lot of places where you didn't include littlw ords like it and such... and... you called Kat "it" i think. just the sentences were a but awkward, but i'm sure if you had read through it again or something simple like that, you could fix it easily. i have faith. this was short though. short. so i can't really pin-point any emotions of mine. it was an ok chapter... but so short, i didn't really feel anything. i would like it if you wrote an actual story about real Jou getting kidnapped after Seto went to America or something, and everyone's like, you didn't even like Jou, why do you care so much?... and they have to find Jou and all that... *cough* can't wait for something bigger! i really can't, i want to read something big from you! review you later^_^ |
 Jessa Wheeler Princeton 2008-02-07 . chapter 10That was so sad. But it was ok. |
 saturnoutlaw 2008-02-07 . chapter 10it wasnt that bad. it may not have been very actiony (yes, i know, not a word) but it was good, in a sad way.
well, it was really sad at the end. Poor jou! how do u sleep at night?!?!lol jk. it's fun to mess with them.
-s.o the sadist |
 Fluffyfangirl89 2008-02-07 . chapter 10lol, it was nice i liked it, though i kinda want to read more to dat one, cuz id just lik to see more...set and kat r so cute! though its sad dat happened to kat, i still lov it!!keep up the great work! :) |
 Maskelle 2008-02-06 . chapter 10Well, the ending wasn´t bad. I do hope Set will get his revenge on Bakura. Poor Kat, but het is safe now:) Loved it and can´t wait for the next chapter! |
 lilz 2008-01-31 . chapter 9 i really really really like your one-shots! this is a great series. please keep 'em coming!! |
 lilz 2008-01-31 . chapter 1 lol! I can just see Jou guessing his eyes. Plus, you write a very smexy Kaiba. thank you for writing! |
 Fluffyfangirl89 2008-01-31 . chapter 9lol, ur really funny, u kno dat? well i really liked this ch too! jou and seto r so cute! so keep up the good work, heheh not really sure wat else to say, so ill go wit some motivation :) |
 Maskelle 2008-01-31 . chapter 9Your rambles always make me grin from ear to ear. I loved the new chapter and can´t wait for the next one! |
 mandapandabug 2008-01-30 . chapter 9cannot wait for more!! like the other fics! they sound interesting and like something i've never read, so it will be interesting. well... this little story was warm and fuzzy all over. i'll be watching Static Shock in a few seconds that is one of my favorites. well... review you later^_^ |
 devotedtodreams 2008-01-30 . chapter 9Aw... maybe I'm weird, I dunno, but this chapter made me kinda sad... I feel sorry for both Seto and Jou.
Still, it was lovely. SetoxJou rocks!! ^_^
Keep up the good work! :) |
 Mari 2008-01-29 . chapter 9 This? Freaking adorable. I've loved every single "chapter." Keep writing please! |