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| Hotpan 2008-08-01 ch 1,  | abusecute |
| happinessheart 2008-07-18 ch 1, | abusehow cute! loved it. |
| Meresta 2008-06-17 ch 1, | abuseThe thing I like best about this one is, how the flow is just right. Their interaction is rusty, but charming all the same and I enjoy their dialogue. It's also nice to see how things repeat, like the mentioning of the scar Balthier gave Vaan, the scarf and how Vaan (or things belonging to Vaan) always leave sand, where ever they go. It gives the story character and makes it real. Great, great job, take care, ~Res |
| DarkAngelKisses 2008-05-28 ch 1, | abuseDamn I loved this so much I'm faving it right now. 1. The peach scarf was a lovely touch. 2. The fact that Vaan can dance was wonderful and amusing. 3. I loved the fact that Balthier kissed his scar. |
| mot 2008-05-18 ch 1, anon. | abuselikes |
| Devon 2008-04-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseX3 |
| Blood-Smeared Shuriken 2008-04-03 ch 1, | abuseUtterly beautiful. Somehow I never thought of Vaan being able to dance but it suits him, and the interplay with the scarf was very prettiful. I loved every minute of it. |
| overchay 2008-03-05 ch 1, | abuseThis was just *lovely*. A little sweet, a little melancholy, and overall just very delightful. I especially loved the cute "Lord of the Sky Pirates" bits. |
| Yukari Youkai 2008-01-28 ch 1, | abuseThe imagery was wonderful! I liked the next to last scene where Balthier and Vaan are like two awkward grade schoolers. Or Balthier explaining their mutual attraction like a head cold: "It will pass." |
| soleilnoire 2008-01-23 ch 1, | abuseI actually think this deserves so much more recognition. The imagery is so pretty and the ending is just perfect. I really like it. Well done! |
| DaughterofDeath 2008-01-22 ch 1, | abuseadd a new chapter |
| Clover Garvin 2008-01-19 ch 1, | abuseOh, I loved it! So beautifuly written, I wish all Bal/Vaan fics were as cute and well done as this one. =)~ Please, write more, you're a great Author! |
| Staryday 2008-01-08 ch 1, | abuseThat ending was beautiful. I really liked it. And the rest was good to. Perfect grammar, witty writing, just enough detail to get the point across without boring the reader to tears. This is really top quality work, I think. I think the cutest part was when Vaan got busted stealing Balthier's gil and didn't even bat an eye. Great job. ~Staryday~ |