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Peachie Bunni
2008-09-29
ch 9,
abuseMan. Damn I feel bad for Roxy. yeah he deserves it and all, but pain is pain. :'( I wish Axel wouldn't do this... it's honestly just killing me :(

Can't wait for the next chapter!
Crimson wounds
2008-09-27
ch 9,
abusecool
xforalways
2008-09-20
ch 9,
abuseHearing that quote always makes me sad, and it made me cry especially tonight. I love this story so much, and I'm glad I finally got to read this chapter :D. I haven't been able to, and I'm glad that I get to now!

I loved the way you formed this chapter, and it flowed beautifully. It was perfect length.

Can't wait to see the next update!
Razer Athane
2008-09-16
ch 9,
abuseGood update though I encountered a spelling mistake. Change 'boos' to 'boss', its during the Rufus x Reno lovin' (you ship that? :\ Not a fan really but hey we'll see how this turns out).

Geostigma eh? Clever, clever. At least its the same, normal-ish Geostigma instead of a "second type" that pops up in the FFVII Section lately. Oh well. 'Poor' Genesis (yeah, not really a fan of Genesis).

The last little exchange was alright, it was refreshing to see the 'that's not true, I would' thing flipped between them. Roxas is kinda... pr!ck-like in this fic which is interesting to see.

I have one criticism - this was originally supposed to be a Demyx x Axel x Roxas x Namine, right? I think you might be losing your way. There probably should be more time focused on those four as opposed to Genesis, Seph, Sora, Riku, etc. Just be careful :/

Baby Zack... X] Heart!
Kiki Lelsissia
2008-09-16
ch 9,
abuseWow. Totally irony. That last line... Axel said that as Roxas was leaving. Nice way to flip it around.

Generally, I don't like Roxas bashing... But here, he deserves it. He freaking deserves it. Bash him all you like.

Reno and Rufus are just awesome. I like their definition of "making love" as compared to "f-cking each other to a standstill." They sound the same to me. Stripper Reno would be funny, but I suppose we'll just have to deal without!

Oh boy. So if Roxas (and Zexion) break up Axel and Demyx's wedding... then Axel (and Demyx?) will hate them forever. That's not what we want to happen... is it? Meh, I'm undecided. Right now I'm totally supporting Demyx with Axel, but we'll see. Roxas will have to do some pretty convincing stuff to get back into Axel's (and our... or at least my) good graces. Good luck, Roxas. God knows you need it.

Genesis... has Geostigma? Oh no.. poor Sephiroth. And Zack. Definitely poor them. I hope Genesis is okay...

I feel a bit sorry for Nami here, she's really just caught in the middle. If Roxas was given a choice, and he picked Axel, where would she be? Hmm... out in the cold, I guess. I'm not sure...

-Kiki
paupu fruits rox
2008-09-16
ch 9,
abuseoh my gosh! this chap was awesome!

especially when Roxas was like 'but don't u love me anymore?'

i was like Ooh lol

anyways i can't wait to see what happens next :D
ToneStar92
2008-08-09
ch 8,
abuseNice story, I look forward to more!
xforalways
2008-07-17
ch 8,
abuseM and the plot thickens.. :P haha. I wonder how things will turn out. Well I believe that Demyx will somehow get back together with Zexion and the same for Axel and Roxas.

Can't wait to see how it turns out!
oh-my-Ra
2008-07-11
ch 8,
abusewhats up with Zexion?!?!?!
I MUST KNOW!! Update soon!
Kiki Lelsissia
2008-07-11
ch 8,
abuseLike it wasn't obvious, Roxas. Come on. Seriously. You just didn't want to admit it. Zexion knows these sorts of things. He's Zexion, he just has to. Roxas isn't entirely happy for Axel... he'd much rather be in Dem's place. However, there's the problem of Roxas being married to Axel's sister... The love pentagon strikes again. Heh. Complicated... very complicated... I would have liked to have seen Cloud's party. Cloud in a purple dress. And Squall's party! Oh yes! Awesome. Suspect Rufus would have raised hell about that. The description on Yuffie and Tifa sounds fun, like Demyx said. Of course Zexion had been crying. Demyx is getting married, and it isn't to him. They have every right not to want it to happen.

-Kiki
Razer Athane
2008-07-10
ch 8,
abuse“How could I forget? Someone convinced Reno to be the stripper and when Rufus found out he set that panther of his Dark Nation on the ones responsible.” Squall shuddered at the memory. - I-YAH. RENO STRIPPING. IMAGEZ. IN HEAD. E3E3E. :D :D :D :D rofl.

“But you’re still in love with your ex.” Roxas pointed out. Then Zexion said something that made his blood freeze.

“So are you.” - Ooh, BURN!! And not in the Axel way either. ;) XD
Crimson wounds
2008-07-10
ch 8,
abuseNONONONONONO

i'm like on the verege of cryin', please don't put axel and roxas together, demyx and axel have so much together and roxas had his chance...

Okay after my fit, i'd like to point out that this is one of the best stories i've ever read, and you use great little scenarios which drive readers like me CRAZY!

luv your work Continue...
paupu fruits rox
2008-07-10
ch 8,
abuseOoh I have a feeling Roxas is gonna talk Zexion into taking Demy away from Axey lol

Oh my gosh this is getting better and better so keep it up :D
EriNicoleAndUKnowIt
2008-07-10
ch 8,
abuseErinicole: I'm going insane with this story! -lunge at author-
Rinex: -tackles Erinicole back-
Erinicole: I love this too much to stop reading, but i live for akuroku and zemyx! !
Please update soon!
p.s. the bachelor party stuff was hilarious. loved it!
Nierx
2008-07-10
ch 8,
abuseO...Good retort Zexion. I love the part with Cloud in a dress.
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