Reviews for Mixed feelings

Addicted Archangel 2008-05-25 ch 1,	abuseYour wording is good and there aren't that many factual errors, but at some level I find it really hard to believe that Hotch would react like this, especially after just losing his son. Perhaps you could use some work on your dialogue, there are a few too many moments where it's just not plausible. But I think you might have a good idea going, so do continue. /AA
deadlyshadow 2008-01-08 ch 1,	abuseyour ver. of hotch is so far from the real one that if stood on the head of one you wouldn't be able to see the other. Not only that but your story is way rushed w/ no realistic human interaction and even less realistic boss-subordinate interaction. This whole fic is just a copped out way of getting them in bed next time just have arron cheat and save yourself the trouble of coming up w/ a plausible (if only in your pathatic harliquin melted excuse for a brain) reason. Don't worry you won't be anymore ooc then you are right now(I don't think that's even possible) and you readers will know what there getting into:a highschool girl's fantasy #$%@fest
Helencsi 2008-01-08 ch 1,	abusei lik ur story realli good keep up the good work