This is great.

Great line: "planting a very enthusiastic kiss on his teeth, as he had just started saying something." This is very realistic and endearing.

I love the weeping jelly babies. How clever! I love, "she should have bitten the head off first".

Well done!

E.

Well this is a good chapter. Update please. Keep smiling. :-)

Maybe she should bite the head off now...

lol that was cute.

*grins merrily*

Oh, I saw this and never read it, so I'm glad you commented about it again! Fancy all that nonsense (nonsense is GOOD) about jellybabies turning into this! Lovely!

Hmm... yapyap??

*grins merrily again*

Hey!
I loved this chapter!
Will there be more?
The Jellybabie seem so cute :P

Very good x
~Claire