I was delighted to see another of your stories up and as usual, you deliver! Excellent start, I love stories that dig into the character's heads and you have Eiri down pat-from his self-loathing to his self-denial. I eagerly await the next chapter!

Wow, that was just so Yuki. Great job, Gabby

thanx please update the next chapter soon i cant wait to read it .

aw...even though i can see where Yuki is coming from, I still am sad for poor sweet Shuichi.

Oh, this is SO good. Excellent way of getting into Yuki's mind at that historical time. Awesome!

AWESOME! This is an extremely unique interpritation of the park scene. Most people dismiss it as Yuki just being cold because of his personality. I love the idea of Shuichi reminding Yuki of his former self and I LOVE your stories! They really expand the characterization in a way that's creative but believeable. I love the in-depth analysis of how each character thinks and acts and the reasons for their behavior. You are by far the best Gravitation author I've ever read.

Yeah! You don't know how happy I am to see the TBC there. Please, please continue this story! You have such a talent for writing and I love reading your work.

I love your Eiri and his twisted logic. Anxious to read more!)

This is the beginning of an amazing story. Just yesterday I was reading the translated versons of Shining Collection and, ironically enough, Glaring Dream and wondering if Eiri was really angry at his(Shuichi's) writing or the naïveté of the lyrics themsleves. I like this story a lot. Can't wait for the next chapter.

I love this types of stories, the ones that sorta fill in the blanks. It is a great beginning and I sure hope you continue it.

Definite fave. C'ya next chapter.