|Reviews for The Persistence of Memory|
| noonsam 1/9/08 . chapter 1
I was delighted to see another of your stories up and as usual, you deliver! Excellent start, I love stories that dig into the character's heads and you have Eiri down pat-from his self-loathing to his self-denial. I eagerly await the next chapter!
| Gabby0214 1/9/08 . chapter 1
Wow, that was just so Yuki. Great job, Gabby
| Nayami-Chan 1/9/08 . chapter 1
thanx please update the next chapter soon i cant wait to read it .
| DarkHeart16 1/8/08 . chapter 1
aw...even though i can see where Yuki is coming from, I still am sad for poor sweet Shuichi.
| Xedra 1/8/08 . chapter 1
Oh, this is SO good. Excellent way of getting into Yuki's mind at that historical time. Awesome!
| none111 1/8/08 . chapter 1
AWESOME! This is an extremely unique interpritation of the park scene. Most people dismiss it as Yuki just being cold because of his personality. I love the idea of Shuichi reminding Yuki of his former self and I LOVE your stories! They really expand the characterization in a way that's creative but believeable. I love the in-depth analysis of how each character thinks and acts and the reasons for their behavior. You are by far the best Gravitation author I've ever read.
| DarkInuyashaangel101 1/8/08 . chapter 1
Yeah! You don't know how happy I am to see the TBC there. Please, please continue this story! You have such a talent for writing and I love reading your work.
| scorch66 1/8/08 . chapter 1
I love your Eiri and his twisted logic. Anxious to read more!)
| KatrinaKaiba 1/8/08 . chapter 1
This is the beginning of an amazing story. Just yesterday I was reading the translated versons of Shining Collection and, ironically enough, Glaring Dream and wondering if Eiri was really angry at his(Shuichi's) writing or the naïveté of the lyrics themsleves. I like this story a lot. Can't wait for the next chapter.
| SexyRyu28 1/8/08 . chapter 1
I love this types of stories, the ones that sorta fill in the blanks. It is a great beginning and I sure hope you continue it.
Definite fave. C'ya next chapter.