Reviews for Takato: The Trouble With Bread

Azure Ghidorah 2008-01-24 ch 1,	abuse'Violet eyes threatening to murder him if his mind continued on the dark path it was walking' had to be my favorite line. This was good, I needed a bit of humor, and what better way then with a little embarressment?
Ruki44 2008-01-09 ch 1,	abuseaw, that had to be the kawaist thing ever, kinda short though...but well writen all the same
E.S. Simeon 2008-01-08 ch 1,	abuseHm, although it is short I could see why you put things together into this small piece. For all this, I would say that it is not bad, I like it. It's got just the small touch of Rukato somewhere in there with the words that made it cute. Although better with a plot, it is still good enough for a quick Rukato read I'd say.
Hero Slayer 2008-01-08 ch 1,	abuseHehehe, nice, i can picture it all. Glad to see your back
Depthmon 2008-01-08 ch 1,	abusegood story