| Reviews for Dirty Old Man |
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Deb 11/5/11 . chapter 3 Is this the absolute end to the story I think there's more to tell ya think. maybe. Thanks |
Skyrere 9/11/11 . chapter 3damn it woman! each of these is a one shot, and each damn one begs to be continued. I want more of each of the three that are here. ga-a-a-a! |
Skyrere 9/11/11 . chapter 1HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! You're not having a heart attack are you? Priceless. I love seeing this from his perspective... |
Zathium 7/2/11 . chapter 3These one-shots are great. Especially the first one. Very well-written. |
LaiChan 6/3/10 . chapter 3Wow, those are really good. Especially the 1st and 3rd. Can I assume there's still more to come? |
unearthing 5/9/10 . chapter 2And it wasn't attraction, but misogyny that had caused him to behave as he did towards her. this should be chauvinism instead of misogyny. but yes :) I am very much enjoying these lil one shots so far and I'll continue to read on |
Vivi007Nee 12/27/09 . chapter 3...Geehee...that was awfully sweet, too. So...I guess...these are all just oneshots? XD It took me FOREVER to figure that out...in any case, loved each one. This is a great pairing. Sadly, I have nothing constructive to tell you-just KEEP WRITING! :D |
Vivi007Nee 12/27/09 . chapter 1BAHAHA...that was great. XD Usually I wait until I've read all the posted chapters of a new fic before reviewing, but I wanted to say a few things right off the bat: -Kakashi's inner monologue is wonderful. I think he's one of, like...3 characters in the entire series that would ACTUALLY think this poetically. The writing itself, by the way, is nothing to sneeze at. -The juxtaposition between Kakashi the (wholly justified) drama llama and Sakura's inadvertant (sp?) jab at his age was nothing short of beautiful. Gosh, I'm so excited to read the rest... |
Hana no Sutoomu 10/9/09 . chapter 3aw, thats quite sweet and funny. loved all the oneshots |
graydevilforever 10/8/09 . chapter 3I loved the poem in your last story. |
Qualia Des 6/28/09 . chapter 3Very sweet. ) |
Qualia Des 6/28/09 . chapter 1VERY hot. I can just imagine (in oh so many wonderful ways XD) what Kakashi is going to do next. |
Mary B. Wolf 5/27/09 . chapter 1I think this is my favorite of all three of these shorts. But the rating shown is 'T,' despite your author's note. ; Thought you might want to know. But this is so passionate, so intense. I love it. And it seems like this might be what was going through Kakashi's head pre-Fourteen Dates. I don't know if you intended that, but they're connected in my head now. D -Wolfie-lou |
DarKxKunoichi 2/14/09 . chapter 3too cute! from someone who reads the story entire year since it was updated. lol. weird coincidence. ] |
Anzaraneth 1/2/09 . chapter 3Wow. This fanfic is really good; both story-wise and grammatically. The first chapter is...AMAZING...and the next two are just as good. I like the third, especially since I attempt the same feat, and seem to fail miserably... But Kakashi can at least write basic poetry, apparently. -Zara |