 AidenSmith 2009-07-23 . chapter 35 it was a really good story besides the fact that u killed one of my favorite people *cough cough* emmett!
yay paul died i hate him =]
but u made rose in pain she is my 2nd favorite ='[
how could u do that??
its so sad..
anyways it was good and i just wanted to base my opinion!
bye! |
 brunettelamb 2009-07-16 . chapter 35aww *sniff* |
 brunettelamb 2009-07-16 . chapter 27NO EMMETT! |
 forbidden-fruit-911 2009-03-14 . chapter 35*GASP*
*TEAR TRICKLES DOWN CHEEK*
OMG i LOVE seth! and i can see how much you love him too! readers, wasn't this AMAZING?! it just made me want to burst into sobs!
I am so glad that they are finally together! Wow, that was incredible!
"Together. Forever."
Holy crap, my adrenaline is pumping and everything! This story made me so happy! What an incredible ending! Seth is so sweet! Just in case fanfiction decides to be stupid and undo all of my exclamation marks, i put about twenty after i put "seth is so sweet"
WOW! If this is how this story ends, i can't wait until you finish your other stories!
I love you forever BTBF! you never cease to amaze me with your brilliant writing!
Love always,
Gracie
p.s. CONGRATULATIONS TIMES A MILLION ON FINISHING YOUR STORY! (80 more exclamation marks) |
 EVWTForever 2009-03-03 . chapter 34oh, so sad! I like re living Romeo and Juliet, though! I haven't read that play since seventh grade...two years ago! |
 HeswamtoFrance 2009-03-02 . chapter 35Fantastic. I love this. Seth scattering the ashes I think was perfect. I am sad to see it end though. I hope to read more of your stories.
George |
 xEdwardLovesMex 2009-03-02 . chapter 35that brought tears to my eyes, especially when edwards ashes got scattered round bella's grave and when edward said we can be together forever, i like your bella so much more than stephanie meyer's one stephanie's one is annoying and im so upset that your story ended i really enjoyed it, hope to see something soon from you you're an amazing writer |
 Applepie121 2009-03-02 . chapter 35awn! I love this ending! so cute!
It makes me love Seth even more.
And jacob died! Yeah! /victory dance!
fantastic job!
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 Melsquando. 2009-03-01 . chapter 35Aw..
*Wipes tears away* (literally)
Thank you SO much for all the work you've done for making this fanfiction. (:
I think that was the best ending there every could have been.
Sigh. It's great to know they're happy. |
 iluvthecullensSOmuch 2009-03-01 . chapter 35OMG AMAZING story and chapter see i thought u were gonna hav them just die but i LOVE this ending YAYAYYAYAYAYAYAYYAYAYAYAYY! |
 iluvthecullensSOmuch 2009-03-01 . chapter 34AH AMAZING chapter but PLZ dont make it exactly lik romeo and juliet make them both liv PLZ! |
 xEdwardLovesMex 2009-03-01 . chapter 34OMG please don't let them die, i liked how you still had the romeo and juliett concept but changed it slightley i hope bella and edward get their happy ending though |
 Melsquando. 2009-02-28 . chapter 33AH!!
You're killing me.. D:
You know, I finally see the resemblance between this stry and Romeo and Juliet..
Edward is ripped into shreds, but is still alive... Bella commits suicide.. Edward wakes up.. :D
BUT, I'm thinking that Jacob is saving her right now.
Sigh. Poor Bella..
I can't STAND knowing Edward is even remotely close to being gone (I don't say dead, cause.. well. Yeah.). D':
I REALLY hope you update soon!
-a message from Melsquando Portabellobird. |
 iluvthecullensSOmuch 2009-02-28 . chapter 33AMAZING! ah but y'd u end there update SON! |
 EVWTForever 2009-02-27 . chapter 33oh wow! I knew I should've thought of the cliff! I might've done the same thing! And now I wonder if Jake is quick enough to save her...I can't wait to find out! |