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SkySurf
2008-01-10 . chapter 1
Oh my..this story is so nice!! XD I love it the way you protray Tezuka's feelings, as in how he will always become calm again whenever Fuji is around him. :D
a1y-puff
2008-01-09 . chapter 1
that was so sweet!!
the way Fuji suddenly showed up in Tezuka's bad after he got mad was just... love
acantabloom
2008-01-08 . chapter 1
This is quite wonderful! You write very well, both in general and in terms of characterizing Tezuka and Fuji. It's all suitably understated, and yet touching. I like the sticky note, and where it turned up in the end. However, I did feel like the progression from the second to last scene to the last scene was a bit sudden. It seemed like Fuji was upset, but got over it or came to some decision on his own. I know he can be spontaneous and unpredictable, but I guess I would have liked to see Tezuka come to a realization on his own, or take a more active role in that, or at least apologize to Fuji.
It was a very lovely ending, though.
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