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| rainefan 2008-02-28 ch 3, | abuseWhat a beautiful story. |
| LocoGreggo 2008-02-27 ch 3, | abuseWonderful job. That was amazing. *Applauds* |
| LocoGreggo 2008-02-27 ch 2, | abuseWonderful job. Poor Stella and Flack. |
| prplerayne 2008-02-09 ch 3, | abuseI love it when Stella and Flack have more to say!! You really captured that hospital environment perfectly! And the ending...*sigh* |
| katydid13 2008-02-02 ch 3, | abuseVery good! |
| Spontaneity 2008-01-27 ch 3, | abuseYAY! |
| nyakattia 2008-01-26 ch 3, | abuseForgive me for not reviewing sooner. :P I loved this chapter! You have a real gift for getting into the characters heads, and it was so easy to just flow through with Stella's thoughts as she remembered bits and pieces, memories coming to her on top of one another, so that one moment she was saying she couldn't remember, and the next she was thinking about the finer details of what the last few days had meant. I am so glad she remembers everything now! It would have really sucked if she had forgotten the events of 12 days. I liked how she describes him to. :D As if she's seeing him for the first time and listing off his physical description, but already knowing the way expressions show on his face, the shade of his eyes. I love this story. More soon? |
| marialisa 2008-01-26 ch 3, | abuseGreat description of waking up after an operation - I remember it well! I like how you describe her noticing she can't move her hand when she first wakes up. She doesn't know why (we do - a sleeping Flack is holding it)and her memories at this point are limited to the month, the year, her address etc, but not of him. Later, when the memories return, she still can't move her hand but this time she can turn her head and see Flack holding it and the memories start to return...and who could forget being loved like that? Beautiful imagery as always and a lovely ending. |
| mandy9578 2008-01-25 ch 3, | abuseI love how Stella was trying to remember everything and how everything had fallen into place for her when she Flack. Thanks for this. :) |
| twinkeyrocks 2008-01-25 ch 3, | abuseNo I don't want it to be over! This is amazing as always! |
| ShannonG 2008-01-25 ch 3, | abuseYay! She remembered! I loved this chapter...it gave more background while also letting Stella speak for awhile. And am I correct in guessing that this might be the real end? It could work well as an ending, though I'd love to see more. :) |
| TatianaMik 2008-01-25 ch 3, | abuseAw... And you did a good job with the medical stuff. |
| IluvPeterPetrelli 2008-01-25 ch 3, | abuseI like this chapter too. I am so happy that Stella remebers everything, it would make me sad if she didn't. I love how Flack has been there the whole time, very sweet. I love the line where the nurse told her to get healthy because every other woman has an eye on him. |
| Aphina 2008-01-25 ch 3, | abuseHey. I loved this chapter, the end of it really touched my heart, I lvoed the raw emotion between the two. All of Stella's memories returning brought a smile to my face. |
| Shelbers 2008-01-25 ch 3, | abuseYAY! Stella's ok:) OK, gotta make this quick...class in 15 mins...and I still have to get out of dorm, lol. Loved it:) Didn't expect anything else but for Flack to stay at her side. Great job! |